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12/21/2023 c16 Guest
Yes , I am very interesting to read this story ,all I hope you can finish it , I don't want to sound rude it just frustrating to fell in love with an unfinished story
12/17/2020 c1 sheoddicted46
I just find this book. I like your story.
6/25/2020 c1 Shadowghostnatalya
Interesting concept.
However, Four and Tris are a little out of character.
Could you make Tris a little more agressive and Four quiet?
Other than that, yes, I liked the idea of this fiction.

Good job! I almost cldnt tell that u wer a first time writer.
6/5/2020 c1 1GreekFangirl74
I love it, I've just started my own fanfic, and I enjoy the story so far!
5/23/2020 c13 4Divergent31
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next.
5/15/2020 c12 Unicornpotato4
I love this series and I wait for every day to see if theres a update it is an amazing story to read and I cant wait for the next chapter also every time I read a update I always smile at the quality work you do
5/11/2020 c12 nasa0.0
ahhhh no why ahhh! you should probably work on making the chapters a bit longer and i really hope four is fine and didn't get a serious injury from the accident
5/9/2020 c12 SugarPlum36
5/9/2020 c12 Divergent31
you should definitely continue! great chapter by the way!
5/1/2020 c11 LunaLovegood48
This story is amazing! You are an awesome writer! Also, great name - I am called Rose too! Keep writing! This is amazing!
5/2/2020 c11 SugarPlum36
NOW I'M WRECKED! You MUSTTTT write more sooooooon *bawling my eyes out over here*
5/2/2020 c9 SugarPlum36
You should write a Hunger Games one!
5/2/2020 c6 SugarPlum36
hahah love Harry! this chapter was also adorrrraabbbbblllleeeeee
5/2/2020 c5 SugarPlum36
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW i am squealing! and my sister is looking at me like i'm insane but AWWWWW *ugly cry*
5/2/2020 c3 SugarPlum36
"hand" is what you said, it is "hang". "cuckle" when you meant "chuckle". also you forgot some periods. Some names weren't capitalized. "Zeke ansWers my qUestion" and i also think it would be "pointedly" not "pointingly" but i am not sure on that one. I plan to be an english major so i am probably being annoying but i thought i'd let you know! While i may be giving corrections, it is only because i love divergent and love this fan fic! 3 Maddie
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