for It Started With A Spill5/13 c1 Ethanv4z9
I stumbled upon Storio (storioai dot com) yesterday — really interesting. They provide AI tools for fast fiction writing and turning chapters into playable scenes. Seems promising if you like tools like Reedsy or Twine.
I stumbled upon Storio (storioai dot com) yesterday — really interesting. They provide AI tools for fast fiction writing and turning chapters into playable scenes. Seems promising if you like tools like Reedsy or Twine.
12/21/2023 c16 Guest
Yes , I am very interesting to read this story ,all I hope you can finish it , I don't want to sound rude it just frustrating to fell in love with an unfinished story
Yes , I am very interesting to read this story ,all I hope you can finish it , I don't want to sound rude it just frustrating to fell in love with an unfinished story
6/25/2020 c1 Shadowghostnatalya
Hmmm
Interesting concept.
However, Four and Tris are a little out of character.
Could you make Tris a little more agressive and Four quiet?
Other than that, yes, I liked the idea of this fiction.
Good job! I almost cldnt tell that u wer a first time writer.
Hmmm
Interesting concept.
However, Four and Tris are a little out of character.
Could you make Tris a little more agressive and Four quiet?
Other than that, yes, I liked the idea of this fiction.
Good job! I almost cldnt tell that u wer a first time writer.
6/5/2020 c1 
1GreekFangirl74
I love it, I've just started my own fanfic, and I enjoy the story so far!
1GreekFangirl74I love it, I've just started my own fanfic, and I enjoy the story so far!
5/15/2020 c12 Unicornpotato4
I love this series and I wait for every day to see if theres a update it is an amazing story to read and I cant wait for the next chapter also every time I read a update I always smile at the quality work you do
I love this series and I wait for every day to see if theres a update it is an amazing story to read and I cant wait for the next chapter also every time I read a update I always smile at the quality work you do
5/11/2020 c12 nasa0.0
ahhhh no why ahhh! you should probably work on making the chapters a bit longer and i really hope four is fine and didn't get a serious injury from the accident
ahhhh no why ahhh! you should probably work on making the chapters a bit longer and i really hope four is fine and didn't get a serious injury from the accident
5/1/2020 c11 LunaLovegood48
This story is amazing! You are an awesome writer! Also, great name - I am called Rose too! Keep writing! This is amazing!
This story is amazing! You are an awesome writer! Also, great name - I am called Rose too! Keep writing! This is amazing!
5/2/2020 c11 SugarPlum36
NOW I'M WRECKED! You MUSTTTT write more sooooooon *bawling my eyes out over here*
NOW I'M WRECKED! You MUSTTTT write more sooooooon *bawling my eyes out over here*
5/2/2020 c5 SugarPlum36
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW i am squealing! and my sister is looking at me like i'm insane but AWWWWW *ugly cry*
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW i am squealing! and my sister is looking at me like i'm insane but AWWWWW *ugly cry*