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12/18/2019 c1 11civilizedrevolutionary
Love the way you wrote this—it’s a little different from your regular style, I think—the descriptions here are lovely. “Feuilly lays aside his paintbrush for his sword and his courage” is an awesome line, and you paint (hehe) a really clear picture of his personality and beliefs. Great job!
12/18/2019 c1 19CarawynO
A lovely portrait of the man, as it were. You tell a lot about him, and make him very real, without needed too many words. He seems a very decent fellow, all in all, and his deciding to be on the barricade seems perfectly in character with what you've written here.

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