
12/25/2019 c2 phoebe.willow
I love all your stories. You always have top ideas to write stories. I hope I can read more about this story and and the other stories of you. Please write more chapters. I can't wait to read this story.
I love all your stories. You always have top ideas to write stories. I hope I can read more about this story and and the other stories of you. Please write more chapters. I can't wait to read this story.
12/25/2019 c2 frisbeeg70
Ok, this is a little ridiculous. It's the middle ages and you are going on about how people's birth status is not important?
I mean, do you even know what feudalism is? Seriously, I realize you can't be that ignorant of history but the way this chapter came across was a little absurd. Overall this seems like it could be great fic, but your ideas on a meritocracy in the middle ages don't seem well worked out.
Ok, this is a little ridiculous. It's the middle ages and you are going on about how people's birth status is not important?
I mean, do you even know what feudalism is? Seriously, I realize you can't be that ignorant of history but the way this chapter came across was a little absurd. Overall this seems like it could be great fic, but your ideas on a meritocracy in the middle ages don't seem well worked out.
12/25/2019 c2
38Thrushsong k'Varis
I'm enjoying reading this story. I'm wondering though, what's the proper pronunciation of Morgaine?

I'm enjoying reading this story. I'm wondering though, what's the proper pronunciation of Morgaine?
12/25/2019 c2 MioneGreen
Great second chapter! I am looking forward to the training and how Harry interacts with the other pages and squires - and a potential rival in his “younger brother”
ThanksEverSoMuch for sharing
‘Mione
Great second chapter! I am looking forward to the training and how Harry interacts with the other pages and squires - and a potential rival in his “younger brother”
ThanksEverSoMuch for sharing
‘Mione
12/25/2019 c2 retired10
Another wonderful chapter! Looking forward to reading more! Great writing! Thank you for sharing your amazing talent!
Another wonderful chapter! Looking forward to reading more! Great writing! Thank you for sharing your amazing talent!
12/25/2019 c2
1Calmzone1
What a wonderful way to wake up on Christmas morning. Especially after a long work day yesterday. Thank you for the great job. It will definitely be a re-reader. Probably multiple times when it is done. :)

What a wonderful way to wake up on Christmas morning. Especially after a long work day yesterday. Thank you for the great job. It will definitely be a re-reader. Probably multiple times when it is done. :)
12/25/2019 c1 retired10
Brilliant chapter and story! Looking forward to reading more! Thank you for sharing your amazing talent!
Brilliant chapter and story! Looking forward to reading more! Thank you for sharing your amazing talent!
12/25/2019 c2 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
12/25/2019 c1
3ObsessedWithHPFanFic
Great first chapter and I like that Harry's purpose has been so defined for him with a way to make it happen. Thanks for sharing!

Great first chapter and I like that Harry's purpose has been so defined for him with a way to make it happen. Thanks for sharing!