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11/29/2022 c29 Urgazhi
Well this was going in a good direction
Good job on that you wrote
11/29/2022 c24 Urgazhi
And suddenly McGonagall appears out of nowhere. The fact that Dumbledore is wondering how he can regain their trust. It's kind of hard to regain their trust when you don't do anything trustworthy.
11/29/2022 c23 Urgazhi
This seems familiar now.

One thing I do find out is why couldn't McGonagall stay at Hogwarts with Dumbledore in the twins for the summer?
11/29/2022 c22 Urgazhi
So take the girl who was unconscious for some basically reason and don't let the school nurse or some expert at at mungo's look at her. That doesn't seem helpful, guys
11/28/2022 c9 Urgazhi
What's mildly surprising this chapter... Is that Harry didn't teleport to Heather. Surprising she would put herself in danger like that. Or that Harry would allow it...

I think this is also the first time I got past the Percy Weasley being a over controlling nutter for 11-year-old.
11/1/2022 c29 Jacob Fritzsching
Please update your story soon!
6/27/2022 c29 DrackNath
i love this story and want to know if you will ever update it? awaiting a reply in eager anticipation
1/21/2022 c21 Pigscantfly
Gosh, the story is great but it seems that Ginny is getting more and more involved with them. I really hope this is not a threesome or something. Books with Harry and a twin always had a third party.
12/27/2021 c9 Subscribe
The golden trio plus 1, extremely boring. Same thing as canon lol
7/12/2021 c15 Guest
This is just canon with another person added, who has no impact on the story
6/10/2021 c29 2Mia Carlisle
Oh, I really hope you healthier just for reading my comment. I wanna say, I LOVE THIS FIC. I know maybe some people think incest just a taboo, but I don't really care, seriously. This fic just amazing with unique pair. I can't wait to see more of them. Get well soon!
4/4/2021 c18 dannyderailed
You can't rest and call another witness at the same time.
3/21/2021 c29 sakurhita
I love it, I wait for the next chapter
3/16/2021 c5 dannyderailed
spoke, he spoke a lot
1/20/2021 c29 mrs. morgan 35
More chapters please
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