
6/30/2020 c47
25wencho17
Took two days this time but finished book 2 lol. This story is so compelling. Cults and cult leaders are a fascinating case study and I think you casted this one well with Valentin. This story while at first seemed like just a DOD vibe now has that full Jonestown feel with some 1984 thrown in there for good measure. The character development has been superb. Love Willow being Sam's kid. Danny's writing has been so real and it's easy to feel for this kid with all he's been through. Anyway, another really fantastic read that much like the first book was hard to put down. On to chapter three. Can't wait to see where this all goes! Happy Writing!

Took two days this time but finished book 2 lol. This story is so compelling. Cults and cult leaders are a fascinating case study and I think you casted this one well with Valentin. This story while at first seemed like just a DOD vibe now has that full Jonestown feel with some 1984 thrown in there for good measure. The character development has been superb. Love Willow being Sam's kid. Danny's writing has been so real and it's easy to feel for this kid with all he's been through. Anyway, another really fantastic read that much like the first book was hard to put down. On to chapter three. Can't wait to see where this all goes! Happy Writing!
6/11/2020 c47
3ghfan51184
Wow! That was intense! I have to find out what happens and I hope that Drew's okay. I also hope that Valentin doesn't completely poison the childrens's mind. Good story!

Wow! That was intense! I have to find out what happens and I hope that Drew's okay. I also hope that Valentin doesn't completely poison the childrens's mind. Good story!
6/11/2020 c46 ghfan51184
Ooo! Good chapter! Port Charles is about to go crazy now! I can't believe Valentin won the election! Poor Lucy! I hope that was just a strang vision and Alexis really won.
Ooo! Good chapter! Port Charles is about to go crazy now! I can't believe Valentin won the election! Poor Lucy! I hope that was just a strang vision and Alexis really won.
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I love the name that Molly picked out. Poor Maxie and Trina. I hope nobody els gets mind mapped.
I love the name that Molly picked out. Poor Maxie and Trina. I hope nobody els gets mind mapped.
6/11/2020 c43 ghfan51184
I love the made up history between Drew and Sam. Very nice that they had met as teenagers. I can picture Wiliam Lipton in the rol of Cam reacting just the way you wrote here if he were to find out that Jason was really his father and calling him out for how he's hardly around for Jake, just like he did during the time Franco thought he was drew, and Jason wanted to come and help with Elizabeth and the boys. Love Cam. Good chapter!
I love the made up history between Drew and Sam. Very nice that they had met as teenagers. I can picture Wiliam Lipton in the rol of Cam reacting just the way you wrote here if he were to find out that Jason was really his father and calling him out for how he's hardly around for Jake, just like he did during the time Franco thought he was drew, and Jason wanted to come and help with Elizabeth and the boys. Love Cam. Good chapter!
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I loved the Liason stuff and the Dream stuff. I can't wait until they tell Cam that he's really Jason's son. I'm so glad Elizabeth remembers everything about their relationship too! I even loved how Willow got Scout to eat the cerial even though it had too much milk. That was way cute. Good chapter! This liason/Dream fan was very happy! :)
I loved the Liason stuff and the Dream stuff. I can't wait until they tell Cam that he's really Jason's son. I'm so glad Elizabeth remembers everything about their relationship too! I even loved how Willow got Scout to eat the cerial even though it had too much milk. That was way cute. Good chapter! This liason/Dream fan was very happy! :)
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I love how Sam is willing to give Danny space to sort all his feelings and thoughts out about Willow. I love how Willow and Sam were talking about their history and stuff with DOD and everything with Kristina explaining why Sam went after Shiloh and then when she found Kristina and Michael in Mexico. I love sam and Willow's relationship in this story. Good chapter!
I love how Sam is willing to give Danny space to sort all his feelings and thoughts out about Willow. I love how Willow and Sam were talking about their history and stuff with DOD and everything with Kristina explaining why Sam went after Shiloh and then when she found Kristina and Michael in Mexico. I love sam and Willow's relationship in this story. Good chapter!
6/11/2020 c40 ghfan51184
Oh boy! Someone needs to kill Nell. Jason, I know you're not working for Sonny because it's too stresssful, but come on! Kill Nelle will you?/ Poor Danny! Poor Wiley too! I'm glad drew's gonna talk to Danny about Willow.
Oh boy! Someone needs to kill Nell. Jason, I know you're not working for Sonny because it's too stresssful, but come on! Kill Nelle will you?/ Poor Danny! Poor Wiley too! I'm glad drew's gonna talk to Danny about Willow.
6/11/2020 c38 ghfan51184
I love the smackdown that both Liz and Sam gave carly! I've recently always hated how sam and Carly are the only ones who can act like they have backbone, and Elizabeth just has to sit there while everyone judged her for her choices in dating Franco, or even having the gall to express concern at Sam getting back together with Jason when Sam couldn't even be there for Drew and used the excuse that drew said he didn't want her around. To be honest, I wouldn't have wanted Sam around if all I had to see is Sam with Jason all the time when she was supposed to be married to me (if I were drew). I'm so glad in your story, things are different, and Elizabeth and sam had a little laugh at them both smacking Carly and giving Carly a piece of their minds. Both Sam and Elizabeth can have backbone, and it's nice to see you writing them like that instead of Elizabeth showing class and restraint. I love how Willow and Sam have already bonded, and are all willing to get to know each other with Jax in toe too. Good chapter!
I love the smackdown that both Liz and Sam gave carly! I've recently always hated how sam and Carly are the only ones who can act like they have backbone, and Elizabeth just has to sit there while everyone judged her for her choices in dating Franco, or even having the gall to express concern at Sam getting back together with Jason when Sam couldn't even be there for Drew and used the excuse that drew said he didn't want her around. To be honest, I wouldn't have wanted Sam around if all I had to see is Sam with Jason all the time when she was supposed to be married to me (if I were drew). I'm so glad in your story, things are different, and Elizabeth and sam had a little laugh at them both smacking Carly and giving Carly a piece of their minds. Both Sam and Elizabeth can have backbone, and it's nice to see you writing them like that instead of Elizabeth showing class and restraint. I love how Willow and Sam have already bonded, and are all willing to get to know each other with Jax in toe too. Good chapter!
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I'm loving the parallels that's happening with Sam right now. I'm hoping now she'll understand the lengths Alexis was willing to go to try to save Sam. Good for her for now trying to do the same for Willow. Harmony's a real piece of work! I love this story so far, even though the history is completely warped, but with the way the memory mapping story has been going even on the show, it wouldn't surprise me if this story actually were to happen.
I'm loving the parallels that's happening with Sam right now. I'm hoping now she'll understand the lengths Alexis was willing to go to try to save Sam. Good for her for now trying to do the same for Willow. Harmony's a real piece of work! I love this story so far, even though the history is completely warped, but with the way the memory mapping story has been going even on the show, it wouldn't surprise me if this story actually were to happen.
6/11/2020 c35 ghfan51184
That was intense! Poor Willlow. I wonder what's wrong with her? Did the all mity V cult give her something? I'm glad Josslyn and Emma made it out of there. I hope Trina can make it out of there too. This is bad news if she can't, and Spencer's being a jerk to Emma. She should hav chosen Cam. As much as I love Nikolas Begtell as an acter, and think he's a great young acter, Spencer is very spoiled, and he plays that rich spoiled entitled kid great! I've never liked when he would call Cam a "towny'. I thought that was very degrating, but now, I've really gotten to like Cam and Trina's relationship. Good chapter!
That was intense! Poor Willlow. I wonder what's wrong with her? Did the all mity V cult give her something? I'm glad Josslyn and Emma made it out of there. I hope Trina can make it out of there too. This is bad news if she can't, and Spencer's being a jerk to Emma. She should hav chosen Cam. As much as I love Nikolas Begtell as an acter, and think he's a great young acter, Spencer is very spoiled, and he plays that rich spoiled entitled kid great! I've never liked when he would call Cam a "towny'. I thought that was very degrating, but now, I've really gotten to like Cam and Trina's relationship. Good chapter!
6/10/2020 c34 ghfan51184
I'm so glad that willow's Sam's daughter, and I'm so glad she's gonna get her fmaily back and try to rescue her.
I'm so glad that willow's Sam's daughter, and I'm so glad she's gonna get her fmaily back and try to rescue her.
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Yay! I'm glad that Willow's Sam's daughter, but she's too nice to be anything like Sam, but hey! I'll take it, because anyone for a mother is bettter than harmony. I'm so glad that sam remembers everything about what went on.
Yay! I'm glad that Willow's Sam's daughter, but she's too nice to be anything like Sam, but hey! I'll take it, because anyone for a mother is bettter than harmony. I'm so glad that sam remembers everything about what went on.
6/10/2020 c31 ghfan51184
Oh man! Poor Sam! She can't catch a break! I almost hope that either Sasha or Willow end up being Sam's daughter in your story. I know she'll win though and that socialworker won't stand a chance giving custody of Nelle! Team Sam!
Oh man! Poor Sam! She can't catch a break! I almost hope that either Sasha or Willow end up being Sam's daughter in your story. I know she'll win though and that socialworker won't stand a chance giving custody of Nelle! Team Sam!