
2/14/2020 c47 Foxyleo28
Oh heck Chrissy you really did this one ain’t no way I would miss the next one. I had a feeling that construction was a bad sign n couldn’t understand why none of them thought it. But really if none of them thought to run when Val won the election n gave his speech then this was going to happening whether they realize the construction was bad or not. ChrissyFan got her baseball bat to head for Ric lol I giggled in the inside ( I really need to work on my love for violence) Well guess Danny is going to be wishing he didn’t say those last words considering he probably doesn’t know if Sam even alive. I can’t wait for the new one.
Oh heck Chrissy you really did this one ain’t no way I would miss the next one. I had a feeling that construction was a bad sign n couldn’t understand why none of them thought it. But really if none of them thought to run when Val won the election n gave his speech then this was going to happening whether they realize the construction was bad or not. ChrissyFan got her baseball bat to head for Ric lol I giggled in the inside ( I really need to work on my love for violence) Well guess Danny is going to be wishing he didn’t say those last words considering he probably doesn’t know if Sam even alive. I can’t wait for the new one.
2/14/2020 c47 chrissyfan
Holy intense! That was good. Alright, I have no clue where you are going right now, just that I'm trusting that the good guys will win and get their happy ever after.
Light's out for Ric. *Scout inspired twirl* Elizabeth baseball bat Ric Lansing's over stuffed noggin' A thing of beauty and worth the wait for an appropriate scene,
Holy intense! That was good. Alright, I have no clue where you are going right now, just that I'm trusting that the good guys will win and get their happy ever after.
Light's out for Ric. *Scout inspired twirl* Elizabeth baseball bat Ric Lansing's over stuffed noggin' A thing of beauty and worth the wait for an appropriate scene,
2/13/2020 c46
20jrchandlerfan1
Yeah looking back I kind of wish I did that chapter a little differently. I should have had Sam not let the kids go to school. But over 75 people read it already so too late now lol. Awe man I’m so addicted to writing this. Woke up at 6am and started the next chapter before work but now I’m thinking of changing all that now. Regardless of how I do it the outcome will be the same.

Yeah looking back I kind of wish I did that chapter a little differently. I should have had Sam not let the kids go to school. But over 75 people read it already so too late now lol. Awe man I’m so addicted to writing this. Woke up at 6am and started the next chapter before work but now I’m thinking of changing all that now. Regardless of how I do it the outcome will be the same.
2/13/2020 c46 chrissyfan
Ohhhhh. When you said walls at the beginning of the chapter I had a feeling this is where you were going. How did Sam, Alexie, Julian et al not notice that the construction was circling them? Well Danny certainly let all of that out. He probably should be careful what he wished for. If Valentin gets his way Danny won't see Sam again.
The recital was very sweet. Alright, color me intrigued as to where this is going.
Ohhhhh. When you said walls at the beginning of the chapter I had a feeling this is where you were going. How did Sam, Alexie, Julian et al not notice that the construction was circling them? Well Danny certainly let all of that out. He probably should be careful what he wished for. If Valentin gets his way Danny won't see Sam again.
The recital was very sweet. Alright, color me intrigued as to where this is going.
2/12/2020 c46 Foxyleo28
Ok Chrissy I guess you had to give me atleast one chapter in this book that made me spit out a few cuss words loudly. But as I said last book I won’t ever put them in your comments lol. ( Oh I just realized I do this last weekend. I cuss like a sailor but if I know someone doesn’t cuss I try not to use them around them) anyway lol. I’m with ChrissyFan Danny starting to give me Spencer n Joss feels. I’m trying to be understanding per I believe children should be able to express themselves openly with respect but what he said to Sam was totally disrespectful. He would have caught a who the F you think you talking too little boy I fought for your life when you had cancer and if I was so stuck on Jason you wouldn’t be here cause he didn’t want you born. I left the same man you think I love more cause I wanted to have you more than my marriage Now you can be hurt by what I did but you not going to keep disrespecting me or Williow who did nothing to you. Ok ok I know that was a rant but my kids know that if you disrespect me I’m totally going to be disrespectful back. I know it’s petty but Oh well. Good chapter you got me all in my feelings. N can’t wait to see how the people of PC going to come out of this.
Ok Chrissy I guess you had to give me atleast one chapter in this book that made me spit out a few cuss words loudly. But as I said last book I won’t ever put them in your comments lol. ( Oh I just realized I do this last weekend. I cuss like a sailor but if I know someone doesn’t cuss I try not to use them around them) anyway lol. I’m with ChrissyFan Danny starting to give me Spencer n Joss feels. I’m trying to be understanding per I believe children should be able to express themselves openly with respect but what he said to Sam was totally disrespectful. He would have caught a who the F you think you talking too little boy I fought for your life when you had cancer and if I was so stuck on Jason you wouldn’t be here cause he didn’t want you born. I left the same man you think I love more cause I wanted to have you more than my marriage Now you can be hurt by what I did but you not going to keep disrespecting me or Williow who did nothing to you. Ok ok I know that was a rant but my kids know that if you disrespect me I’m totally going to be disrespectful back. I know it’s petty but Oh well. Good chapter you got me all in my feelings. N can’t wait to see how the people of PC going to come out of this.
2/12/2020 c45 jrchandlerfan
I do plan on making the kids/teens a big part in the next book. You'll see what I mean by the end of the next chapter which will probably be the last. So yes, that should include Cam and Jake, just maybe not in the way you're thinking atm. It will definitely be a roller coaster ;)
I do plan on making the kids/teens a big part in the next book. You'll see what I mean by the end of the next chapter which will probably be the last. So yes, that should include Cam and Jake, just maybe not in the way you're thinking atm. It will definitely be a roller coaster ;)
2/12/2020 c1 chrissyfan
Alright since the next book comes from Danny's POV, I'll refrain from thinking him Spencer level obnoxious. We will get to see what he is thinking and feeling. Sounds like it s going to be a roller coaster. Does this mean we get to see Cam and Jake with him a bit more since he spends as much time as he can with them?
Alright since the next book comes from Danny's POV, I'll refrain from thinking him Spencer level obnoxious. We will get to see what he is thinking and feeling. Sounds like it s going to be a roller coaster. Does this mean we get to see Cam and Jake with him a bit more since he spends as much time as he can with them?
2/12/2020 c45 jrchandlerfan1
I'm glad you guys liked Alexis Stella. I had that name planned since I made Molly pregnant. I really like Stella so I thought it was appropriate for the middle name. Yes they definitely needed that family scene. Danny is hurting so much, but you're right Chrissyfan, he is being obnoxious. He has a lot of growing to do and I'm setting it up for the next book which will be in his POV. Like I said all hell is going to break loose and I'm not exaggerating. What the kids, and everyone really, have already been through will pale in comparison.
Lol oh no Foxy, I don't want to ruin your gangsta image :D But I think a good cry is good for us sometimes.
I'm estimating 2 more chapters for this book. I don't think this book will be as long as the first. First book was 89,218 words and right now book 2 is sitting at 63,793 words. But we'll see how much more needs to be written. The election is coming and then hell will break loose, so yeah it's looking like 2 more chapters, maybe 3.
I'm glad you guys liked Alexis Stella. I had that name planned since I made Molly pregnant. I really like Stella so I thought it was appropriate for the middle name. Yes they definitely needed that family scene. Danny is hurting so much, but you're right Chrissyfan, he is being obnoxious. He has a lot of growing to do and I'm setting it up for the next book which will be in his POV. Like I said all hell is going to break loose and I'm not exaggerating. What the kids, and everyone really, have already been through will pale in comparison.
Lol oh no Foxy, I don't want to ruin your gangsta image :D But I think a good cry is good for us sometimes.
I'm estimating 2 more chapters for this book. I don't think this book will be as long as the first. First book was 89,218 words and right now book 2 is sitting at 63,793 words. But we'll see how much more needs to be written. The election is coming and then hell will break loose, so yeah it's looking like 2 more chapters, maybe 3.
2/12/2020 c45 chrissyfan
Aw welcome to the world Alexis Stella. Very nice name. The family scenes at the lake were well done. I liked the talk Danny and Drew had, Alright speaking of Danny, I've always seen his point of view as he is hurting but his out right rudeness to his mother and now Willow has bordered on obnoxious and needs to be stepped on soon, he is treading Spencer and Charlotte obnoxious, I know he doesn't trust Willow and trust is earned but answering a question even if he doesn't elaborate is just common courtesy. I'm starting to wonder if he wasn't exposed to a form of mapping one of the times he was abducted.
Aw welcome to the world Alexis Stella. Very nice name. The family scenes at the lake were well done. I liked the talk Danny and Drew had, Alright speaking of Danny, I've always seen his point of view as he is hurting but his out right rudeness to his mother and now Willow has bordered on obnoxious and needs to be stepped on soon, he is treading Spencer and Charlotte obnoxious, I know he doesn't trust Willow and trust is earned but answering a question even if he doesn't elaborate is just common courtesy. I'm starting to wonder if he wasn't exposed to a form of mapping one of the times he was abducted.
2/11/2020 c45 Foxyleo28
Now Chrissy we gonna have a problem if you keep making me cry. It’s ruining my gangsta lol. I’m over all watery eyes awwwing like I’m crazy. This two chapters were very good. I swear they keep getting better n better. You know anytime I get some Sam n Drew with the kids my stone heart melts. It’s going to take some time but I got faith Danny going to get it together. To be honest Sam would have to earn my trust back n that would take things be stable for awhile something that hasn’t happen. I’m not sure if it will with VTown going strong. I can’t wait for more.
Now Chrissy we gonna have a problem if you keep making me cry. It’s ruining my gangsta lol. I’m over all watery eyes awwwing like I’m crazy. This two chapters were very good. I swear they keep getting better n better. You know anytime I get some Sam n Drew with the kids my stone heart melts. It’s going to take some time but I got faith Danny going to get it together. To be honest Sam would have to earn my trust back n that would take things be stable for awhile something that hasn’t happen. I’m not sure if it will with VTown going strong. I can’t wait for more.
2/11/2020 c45 Marimar12
Thank you very much for the lake scene, loved it. I am with you they needed that sweet moment as a family before hell explodes. Poor Danny he doesn't seem to be able to get passed his hurt and since he blames Sam for everything that has happened to him and his family he in turn is portraying that towards Willow. So Sam has to be careful how she handles Danny's distrust towards Willow and not make him resent Willow more than what he already is. Happy Molly named the baby Alexis.
Thank you very much for the lake scene, loved it. I am with you they needed that sweet moment as a family before hell explodes. Poor Danny he doesn't seem to be able to get passed his hurt and since he blames Sam for everything that has happened to him and his family he in turn is portraying that towards Willow. So Sam has to be careful how she handles Danny's distrust towards Willow and not make him resent Willow more than what he already is. Happy Molly named the baby Alexis.
2/11/2020 c44 chrissyfan
Nice. Interesting take on Nelle, Michael and Chase. Little Miss Scout certainly has a larger than life personality- too cute!
Nice. Interesting take on Nelle, Michael and Chase. Little Miss Scout certainly has a larger than life personality- too cute!
2/11/2020 c43 chrissyfan
Excellent! Had to chuckle over Julian and Alexis. Now I previously would have said Leo is just being a kid but as someone sporting a cast from an accidental fall, yup securely on Alexis' side in the stair jumping. Loved that family scene. Hopefully Danny can open up to grandpa. I liked that Cam scene, he doesn't hate Jason and he was reasonably respectful but he is going to make Jason earn his trust. Drew surgery and recovery scenes were beautifully done.
Excellent! Had to chuckle over Julian and Alexis. Now I previously would have said Leo is just being a kid but as someone sporting a cast from an accidental fall, yup securely on Alexis' side in the stair jumping. Loved that family scene. Hopefully Danny can open up to grandpa. I liked that Cam scene, he doesn't hate Jason and he was reasonably respectful but he is going to make Jason earn his trust. Drew surgery and recovery scenes were beautifully done.
2/11/2020 c44 jrchandlerfan
Oh apologies, I meant Marimar not guest.
Oh apologies, I meant Marimar not guest.