for Changing the Course of Fate1/12 c1 angelica98
Beautiful story that could improve a little in the writing, feels a bit rushed and out of character: Harry is pretty forward for a boy at his first time
Beautiful story that could improve a little in the writing, feels a bit rushed and out of character: Harry is pretty forward for a boy at his first time
7/20/2020 c1 
5HarryPotterFangirl85
I’m not quite warmed up to the pairings, but the storyline was good.
5HarryPotterFangirl85I’m not quite warmed up to the pairings, but the storyline was good.
7/5/2020 c1 Guest
yeah who knows indeed
yeah who knows indeed
4/3/2020 c1 imperiomademedoit
Aww! Best! Loved this so much. The sex was hot. The ships were great. The Molly, Mione, Ron, and Ginny bits were a little too much outta left field but you made it work. Good fic all around! Thankyou for sharing with us!
Aww! Best! Loved this so much. The sex was hot. The ships were great. The Molly, Mione, Ron, and Ginny bits were a little too much outta left field but you made it work. Good fic all around! Thankyou for sharing with us!
1/8/2020 c1 16magicanimegurl
The flow seemed to fast in some parts, but the concept of the plot was still shown. I do like the ending and the ships for the most part. Write on!
16magicanimegurlThe flow seemed to fast in some parts, but the concept of the plot was still shown. I do like the ending and the ships for the most part. Write on!