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3/10 c2 Guest
I think it's kinsy not kingsy
11/22/2022 c1 Guest
you made him a pussy hahahaha
8/12/2022 c1 Pridefallen
Revan or any Jedi or Sith are infinitely weaker against all ascended and transcended from Stargate and Babylon 5 't know what you are playing by making those force using parasites overpowered when they are actually not
3/16/2022 c4 SimpleSoda54321
... but it all starts on Tatooinec
2/17/2022 c2 You
Ruined this with making Lya an unnatural connection to another woman. Nope. I’m out.
5/23/2021 c4 Nikkless
its a really a pity about some of the Atlantis cast like Ronan
5/23/2021 c3 Nikkless
way too rushed
5/23/2021 c2 Nikkless
i like this fanfic but its too fastpaced in my opinion
5/23/2021 c1 Nikkless
little bit dissapointed that Revan got the knowledge and the spaceship so soon
2/18/2021 c1 lex28
Is there more to come? please update really great story
4/15/2020 c1 Dansel
I want to like this, I really do, but what you've written has some really poor structure at times. Run-on sentences, very long sentences, missing punctuation, and more. I mean this in the best possible way but you really need someone to edit and clean up the story because as it is now, for me, it's very hard to see what is beyond the somewhat unpolished exterior. Anyhow, good luck.
3/8/2020 c1 Chris
You need to work on this fanfiction more. Spelling and current tense are issues: like he regains consciousness and he ragained consciousness. It like you typed it up, then used autocorrect, but then forgot to read through it again to check for these types of mistakes.

Spelling mistakes and what i call context errors like regains/regained, are what break imersion in stories for me, you need to work on this, if you want to become a good writer.
3/3/2020 c8 stargate-sg1sg1
Keep up the good work!
2/5/2020 c6 haseosamaa
Damn thats a good story
2/5/2020 c5 haseosamaa
Good one tx
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