
1/10/2020 c1 EiNyx
Any reason you use upside down quotation marks? That looks awful and really takes a reader out of any scene.
Any reason you use upside down quotation marks? That looks awful and really takes a reader out of any scene.
1/5/2020 c1
7avatarlopes
Make Jaune say: "I'm the Cook." all serious and someone mistook him for a real cook. That would be pretty funny.

Make Jaune say: "I'm the Cook." all serious and someone mistook him for a real cook. That would be pretty funny.
1/5/2020 c1 Guest
Don't forget to tag the characters. If I was a Jaune fan, I'd search for his tags and end up missing this story because it didn't have them.
Don't forget to tag the characters. If I was a Jaune fan, I'd search for his tags and end up missing this story because it didn't have them.