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1/15/2020 c1 19CarawynO
Ah, the wait for the battle to begin must be agonizing for these boys. To quote from another genre (or paraphrasing at least), 'waiting on the edge of [a battle] you can't avoid...'

I'm not normally a fan of poetry, but this is very well done!
1/6/2020 c1 11civilizedrevolutionary
Oooo this is good - I love the nice rhythm your writing has, and this poem has a somber feeling of comfort and loneliness at the same time - the Amis are there for each other on the barricade, yet most of them will be alone when they die...and now I'm sad. But seriously, gorgeous writing! :)

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