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1/15 c1 19CarawynO
Ah, the wait for the battle to begin must be agonizing for these boys. To quote from another genre (or paraphrasing at least), 'waiting on the edge of [a battle] you can't avoid...'

I'm not normally a fan of poetry, but this is very well done!
1/6 c1 11civilizedrevolutionary
Oooo this is good - I love the nice rhythm your writing has, and this poem has a somber feeling of comfort and loneliness at the same time - the Amis are there for each other on the barricade, yet most of them will be alone when they die...and now I'm sad. But seriously, gorgeous writing! :)

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