for Lokison5/7/2022 c18 TomatoGirl2
OHMYGOD I LOVED THIS CHAPTER
I didn't expect a second part but it is amazing!
Part 3 please?
About the poll, I'd prefer one chapter at a time (if it's easier for you, of course)
But pleeeeaaaase
More about Peter gaining spider-powers while living in Asgard
OHMYGOD I LOVED THIS CHAPTER
I didn't expect a second part but it is amazing!
Part 3 please?
About the poll, I'd prefer one chapter at a time (if it's easier for you, of course)
But pleeeeaaaase
More about Peter gaining spider-powers while living in Asgard
3/28/2022 c18 ObsidianBlackCat
This chapter started so angsty, but ended so cute! You did a great job bringing everyone in!
As for your poll, I'd say post the chapters as you make them. It might be annoying for a few people, but I understand it's annoying to have a chapter waiting while you're working on other things.
I know you have a lot of ideas now, so I'm really hoping that one of them involves Peter learning magic. Can you imagine him accidentally mindcontrolling Flash or something one day? Or making an illusion by mistake that causes trouble? And then Loki needs to teach him. Or alternatively Loki teaches him first for safety, and Peter is reluctant at first but eventually uses it when he's outnumbered. It's just something that's been on my mind for a couple months now.
I'm so glad to read your stuff again!
This chapter started so angsty, but ended so cute! You did a great job bringing everyone in!
As for your poll, I'd say post the chapters as you make them. It might be annoying for a few people, but I understand it's annoying to have a chapter waiting while you're working on other things.
I know you have a lot of ideas now, so I'm really hoping that one of them involves Peter learning magic. Can you imagine him accidentally mindcontrolling Flash or something one day? Or making an illusion by mistake that causes trouble? And then Loki needs to teach him. Or alternatively Loki teaches him first for safety, and Peter is reluctant at first but eventually uses it when he's outnumbered. It's just something that's been on my mind for a couple months now.
I'm so glad to read your stuff again!
3/20/2022 c17 ObsidianBlackCat
Excellent job tying everything up there! Beck was a great way to bring it all together!
But I'm all ready to move on now because *gasp* did you say Asgardian Peter?! I am so ready for the magic! BRING IT ON!
Yet I too am broken from No Way Home. Took me over a week to stop brooding about it. I feel you. These movies should start coming with emotion warnings. "This movie is rated HB for heartbreak and ET for emotional trauma." That's what was needed right at the beginning.
Excellent job tying everything up there! Beck was a great way to bring it all together!
But I'm all ready to move on now because *gasp* did you say Asgardian Peter?! I am so ready for the magic! BRING IT ON!
Yet I too am broken from No Way Home. Took me over a week to stop brooding about it. I feel you. These movies should start coming with emotion warnings. "This movie is rated HB for heartbreak and ET for emotional trauma." That's what was needed right at the beginning.
3/10/2022 c5 Barnes
This is so cute and I wish that this was cannon in Marvel.
This is so cute and I wish that this was cannon in Marvel.
3/10/2022 c16 ObsidianBlackCat
Happy-ish ending st last! Excellent job with the illusion world and real Loki coming in to save the day! But now I'm sad that he's leaving for an indeterminate amount of time! Poor Peter doesn't deserve to get extra family and then lose his real family!
But I enjoyed the chapter anyway. And I'm really intrigued by these 3.0 and 4.0 ideas. I'll be keeping an eye on this story . . .
Congrats on the graduation and job hunt!
Happy-ish ending st last! Excellent job with the illusion world and real Loki coming in to save the day! But now I'm sad that he's leaving for an indeterminate amount of time! Poor Peter doesn't deserve to get extra family and then lose his real family!
But I enjoyed the chapter anyway. And I'm really intrigued by these 3.0 and 4.0 ideas. I'll be keeping an eye on this story . . .
Congrats on the graduation and job hunt!
3/10/2022 c16 Belbelanne
Thank you for writting this chapter, I have missed reading this story, but couldn't it have a happy ending, I was crying when Loki and Peter had to say goodbye to each other, however, love that Peter has added Lokison to his name.
Thank you for writting this chapter, I have missed reading this story, but couldn't it have a happy ending, I was crying when Loki and Peter had to say goodbye to each other, however, love that Peter has added Lokison to his name.
10/17/2021 c15 Guest
Hello, I don't have an ID in FFN, but I occasionally read fanfiction here. Your Peter & Loki(be it as great friends or father-son duo) stories are awesome. I love how your plots are crafted and how well you pen the wonderful ideas down.
I had read this series a long time ago, and I came back to it to see if the story progressed - I must say that I deflated like a punctured balloon when I saw that.
I really love this duo and am ecastic to read the next part of the story - it's your fault that you have a sublime pen that got me hooked up with these stories.
Hello, I don't have an ID in FFN, but I occasionally read fanfiction here. Your Peter & Loki(be it as great friends or father-son duo) stories are awesome. I love how your plots are crafted and how well you pen the wonderful ideas down.
I had read this series a long time ago, and I came back to it to see if the story progressed - I must say that I deflated like a punctured balloon when I saw that.
I really love this duo and am ecastic to read the next part of the story - it's your fault that you have a sublime pen that got me hooked up with these stories.
9/2/2021 c14 Guest
This brings the question.
Is the recklessness from Odin or Frigga?
This brings the question.
Is the recklessness from Odin or Frigga?
8/25/2021 c15 
18ObsidianBlackCat
Oh, the angst, the drama! I'm biting my nails over here!
Also, I have watched the first 4 episodes of Loki, and oh my god he acts so much like your Loki! I don't want to spoil it in case you haven't seen it, but HE DOES THE LULLABY! Your story felt real before, but now it feels almost MCU certified or something.
Although it's sad because then I've been expecting Spider-Man to pop up in the series. Everyone in the show would flip if that Loki actually had a kid! Alas, the world isn't perfect.
18ObsidianBlackCatOh, the angst, the drama! I'm biting my nails over here!
Also, I have watched the first 4 episodes of Loki, and oh my god he acts so much like your Loki! I don't want to spoil it in case you haven't seen it, but HE DOES THE LULLABY! Your story felt real before, but now it feels almost MCU certified or something.
Although it's sad because then I've been expecting Spider-Man to pop up in the series. Everyone in the show would flip if that Loki actually had a kid! Alas, the world isn't perfect.
6/26/2021 c15 Belbelanne
My mind is going nononono Loki is good not evil than it melted when Peter got possessed will this nightmare end soon and we can get some cute fluffy Frostdad and Spiderson moments, please. Love your story this chapter
My mind is going nononono Loki is good not evil than it melted when Peter got possessed will this nightmare end soon and we can get some cute fluffy Frostdad and Spiderson moments, please. Love your story this chapter
4/19/2021 c14 16IBJoyful
It's really good to see a new chapter from you. Take your time and focus on your classes. If it's a while before you post the next chapter, maybe you could do a short "previously on" to summarize what happened before so that people remember what was going on.
Keep up the good work!
16IBJoyfulIt's really good to see a new chapter from you. Take your time and focus on your classes. If it's a while before you post the next chapter, maybe you could do a short "previously on" to summarize what happened before so that people remember what was going on.
Keep up the good work!