for Lokison8/18/2020 c12 Belbelanne
Thank you so much for the new chapter. I'm glad your sister got out with the children, I really hope they stay safe and that a lot of people will be able to help them. Also please do not neglect yourself and please stay safe.
Thank you so much for the new chapter. I'm glad your sister got out with the children, I really hope they stay safe and that a lot of people will be able to help them. Also please do not neglect yourself and please stay safe.
8/18/2020 c12 
12catastrophiqu
so chapter review is I couldn't find that many typos and I enjoyed it
serious response: Take your time with the chapters focus on the important things, I'm sorry I can't donate but I hope he's caught and put away and I wish you, your sister and her kids the best of luck.
stay safe
12catastrophiquso chapter review is I couldn't find that many typos and I enjoyed it
serious response: Take your time with the chapters focus on the important things, I'm sorry I can't donate but I hope he's caught and put away and I wish you, your sister and her kids the best of luck.
stay safe
7/11/2020 c11 Belbelanne
Can't wait for Loki to be given and can use the "Dad" title. Can't wait to read your new story.
Can't wait for Loki to be given and can use the "Dad" title. Can't wait to read your new story.
6/23/2020 c10 Belbelanne
Love the brothers teaming up, and hope everyone can forgive Loki for destroying the compound, at least he didn't destroy the world, can't wait for Peter to get comfortable calling Loki dad and Thor uncle.
Love the brothers teaming up, and hope everyone can forgive Loki for destroying the compound, at least he didn't destroy the world, can't wait for Peter to get comfortable calling Loki dad and Thor uncle.
5/25/2020 c9 Belbelanne
Love the cliffhanger, so happy that Peter called Loki Dad, wonder how Loki is going to react to Peter being taken, don't think too much mercy will be shown by Loki or Thor. Wonder when Thor will get the title of uncle?
Love the cliffhanger, so happy that Peter called Loki Dad, wonder how Loki is going to react to Peter being taken, don't think too much mercy will be shown by Loki or Thor. Wonder when Thor will get the title of uncle?
5/18/2020 c9 25Dimensional Phaser
oh, oh they're in for a world. of. hurt when loki finds them...and thor, let's not forget uncle thor
25Dimensional Phaseroh, oh they're in for a world. of. hurt when loki finds them...and thor, let's not forget uncle thor
5/18/2020 c9 nolongeractive-DEADACCOUNT123
OHHH BOY YOU DO NOT KIDNAP LOKI'S SON
IT AIN'T GOING OVER WELL FOR YOU IN THE END, BOI
OHHH BOY YOU DO NOT KIDNAP LOKI'S SON
IT AIN'T GOING OVER WELL FOR YOU IN THE END, BOI
5/9/2020 c8 12catastrophiqu
I don't know if you'll ever do it but a parent teacher conference/ bring parent to school or something (idk never been to school so) but like flash teases peter that no one came and then of course Loki walks in the door
anyways nice stories
12catastrophiquI don't know if you'll ever do it but a parent teacher conference/ bring parent to school or something (idk never been to school so) but like flash teases peter that no one came and then of course Loki walks in the door
anyways nice stories
5/4/2020 c8 Anita-EMTnurse
Please allow me, as an EMT and a college student working on getting a bachelor's degree in the science of nursing, that the virus wouldn't have caused organ failure for Peter. Unless he had previous history of Respiratory problems, he virus wouldn't have been hardly worse than a cold. Really the number of people dying from covid isn't as high as they are telling you. More people are dying because they aren't allowed to go to the hospital. Seriously, I've never seen such a bad case of Stupidity, "Sorry you can't come to the hospital, you are sick." Why are the freakin' hospitals there if they don't accept sick people? To look pretty?
Also, everyone is using the masks in the wrong way. They won't keep you from getting the virus, they keep you from spitting on people. Seriously, do your homework before you blindly believe everything the news tells you. You are wasting supplies that EMS personnel need to save lives.
Nice story, though. I really like the emotions that are surfacing. Keep up the good work! And don't let my stir-crazed rantings upset you, just take into consideration from someone on the inside that things aren't as bad as the government makes it seem. ;D
Please allow me, as an EMT and a college student working on getting a bachelor's degree in the science of nursing, that the virus wouldn't have caused organ failure for Peter. Unless he had previous history of Respiratory problems, he virus wouldn't have been hardly worse than a cold. Really the number of people dying from covid isn't as high as they are telling you. More people are dying because they aren't allowed to go to the hospital. Seriously, I've never seen such a bad case of Stupidity, "Sorry you can't come to the hospital, you are sick." Why are the freakin' hospitals there if they don't accept sick people? To look pretty?
Also, everyone is using the masks in the wrong way. They won't keep you from getting the virus, they keep you from spitting on people. Seriously, do your homework before you blindly believe everything the news tells you. You are wasting supplies that EMS personnel need to save lives.
Nice story, though. I really like the emotions that are surfacing. Keep up the good work! And don't let my stir-crazed rantings upset you, just take into consideration from someone on the inside that things aren't as bad as the government makes it seem. ;D
4/25/2020 c8 Belbelanne
Love Loki being a concerned dad and confronting May about his right to be near Peter.
Love Loki being a concerned dad and confronting May about his right to be near Peter.
4/21/2020 c2 12SpaceTime1969
I did not see Thor acusing Tony coming at all. Although in Thor's defence Loki mothered an eight legged horse in the myths, so not that unplausable I suppose.
12SpaceTime1969I did not see Thor acusing Tony coming at all. Although in Thor's defence Loki mothered an eight legged horse in the myths, so not that unplausable I suppose.