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2/2/2020 c5 15AleyKitty
I read your story in one sitting unexpectedly last night because I wanted to chill and I wanted a Kurama ffc to chill to, and this fit the bill perfectly. I favorited the story because I'll probably come back and read it again a few times. I really liked how you included the Maya-eseque story with Ichika and the memory-wiping. I also like how you kept her in the dark about a lot of the danger plot stuff because I honestly didn't care about it that much, just that Kurama was with her. Same with the friendship stuff. It cut down on the story's length and made it possible to read in one sitting (a few hours... but whatever.) It kept the pace moving with their relationship. Aaaaanyway, If you'd like some pointers about what you might be able to incorporate as an improvement to your craft, send me a PM and I'll let you know. It's not worth putting on the story itself when it's more because I like to edit that I came up with anything and you deserve to be proud of this story.
1/18/2020 c3 3Yakitori-Chan
I just found your story and I loved these first three chapters. The way you write Ichika and Kurama has me totally hooked. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us

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