9/16 c59 Japhone
Ngl I didn’t except the concept and execution of this to be so good. It’s a shame that this project might not get finished.

You’re definitely a good writer. Dialougue was really well done. If you’re not gonna finish this, then I hope you find a way to make money from writing.

9/4 c52 Gilgamesh50
I just dont get why gohan wants to be a scholar
Your keeping it cliche he literally has TWO saiyan parents and you still cant make him a warrior?

8/16 c52 Neoverna636
I just realized but CC Caulifla sortof dogded a bullet in not knowing her biological family. She has no memory of neither her mom, dad or Renso, heck when Renso sees her, he doesn't recognise her immediately like Raditz with Goku, until he gets her name, which means that when Caulufla was born, she was just placed in a nursing pod until the evacuation of planet vegeta, even then its likely someone else placed her in the faulty pod till Bardock moved her to an operating one

7/16 c8 Guest
If it makes you feel better Monster Carrot’s name is Carrot Master in the Manga. Also Toriyama confirmed that the carrot gang is still alive, just floating in space.

7/14 c6 Guest
Ariadne Venegas , the author wrote Vegan Pizza, not vegetarian pizza, so that means no mozzarella, since it’s made of cheese, a dairy product. Vegans as a rule don’t eat meat and food produced by animals products.

5/31 c59 Guest
Can I make a suggestion? You should look at What if Shenron was A Z Fighter? by Masako X Because that story is awesome and see if it can be implemented here.

Now if you look at that series then you need to look at these ideas. First of if this happens Shenron would be a Dragon among Dragons that would be approaching Super Shenron in terms of power. Speaking of divine powers and Dragons I have a few suggestions for the story.

First off I would also love to see Shenron first develop all the techniques of the Shadow Dragons along with Kami's abilities as Guardian of the Earth and everything I asked for previously just to make him a literal Force of Nature.

Second, Maybe Shenron also trains and gains the powers and techniques of the Lesser Kai's like King Kai, and also the Supreme Kai's just to be a better protector of Earth and also a more powerful warrior that the Earth needs. Maybe that can happen before the Majin Buu Saga. Also if Shenron gets better training with more God Ki in Dragon Ball Super he would become a more Divine being than Kami when he had the Throne of Guardian of Earth.

Third please let this story enter Dragon Ball Super, Dragon Ball Daima, and also take some elements of Dragon Ball GT and make Shenron face down the Shadow Dragon's. But as a downside he also faces down Shadow Dragons born from not only the Negative Energy of the Dragon Balls but also Shenron's human and God Ki and his Divine Dragon Powers and Guardian of Earth's Abilities.

That would make the story be far more personal for Shenron as these are technically his children and maybe he tries to redeem some of them which can happen. This is also an example to the Z Fighters of what happens if the Dragon Balls and also Shenron himself is misused.

5/21 c17 Neoverna636
I have a feeling about Kale in this story, from being referenced in a tfs joke to her actual appearance, its going to be interesting.

But any how, Kale's power level, she likely has a high power level. How do I know, its just speculating, but here's my reasons:

1. Raditz and Renso mention there were 5 other sayians who were stronger than them which includes Kale, which means Kale likely has a high power level. Raditz also mentions how Kale is prone to go on a rampage in her Ikari state, something which happens to Broly which Paragus mentions in the Broly movie. This means Kale was born with a high power level just like Broly.

2. Vegeta kept her around in his group. I know somebody or more people will say "but Kale is a female sayian, he needs her to rebuild his kingdom". Yes that is one thing but keep in mind Kale has a timid personality something that Vegeta would not like to see in a sayian woman and likely wouldn't want his children to inheret her timid deminer, also Freeza likely keeps a keen eye on her to make sure that she isn't bred by any of them.
If Kale was weaker with a power level in 2000's or 3000's with a timid personality, Vegeta wouldn't have hesitated to kill her for being seen as weak.

3. Story dynamic with Caulifla, Kale has to have her friendship with Caulifla happen in the story, likely around Namek/Freeza saga, with Kale showing care towards GohanMenra before and after the battle with Freeza on Namek.

Those were my reasons. but what is the number on her power level, I would say between 14,500 to 16,000. 14,500 is a lower estimate to make it were she's still stronger than GokuCaulifla after their 8 month training on King Kai's planet, 16,000 is to show see is strong but not as strong as Vegeta.

But my question is how did she end up with Vegeta's crew and why she acting soo hollow.
Kale, just like Broly, was born with a high power level, but unlike Broly was never found out by King Vegeta, and was sent off planet to keep her safe. Later after Planet Vegeta's destruction, Vegeta and Nappa found her on a planet they were sent to conquer, suprised a little girl had a high power level. But when they took her along with them they saw how timid she was, and tonot waste a potential warrior and "breeder" they just abused her; Nappa and the others verbially, Vegeta physically as he was the only strong enough to harm her, which over time she just had to go along with what happens to her and just do as they say.

3/14 c56 Arashi Uzukaze
Hm, if Kakarot and Caulifla kept the same weight clothes from the tournament some years ago, then the weighted clothes on King Kai's world would be almost 2 and 1/4 tons! O.O