for Carrots and Cauliflowers3/27/2023 c58 Guest
okay. Plenty to unpack here. So let's get into it!
Providing a little more explanation to the genki dama was much appreciated. A little goes a long way to makes these techniques more relatable.
King Vegeta being here is just fun. Not only is his karmatic afterlife ordeal a nice spin on events. But also having him provide important context via his conversation with Tarble was a nice touch. The kings motivations are all skewed. It's outside his control. and it's just what he deserves after all this time!
King Kai confirms he does not teleport, so no "I could've taught you instant transmission if you asked" bull shit!
And lastly. TOMORROW?! I KNEW this would escalate quickly but DAMN. they barely learned what they came there to learn. The odds are stacked so against them, can't wait to see more!
Chumpchangedraws
okay. Plenty to unpack here. So let's get into it!
Providing a little more explanation to the genki dama was much appreciated. A little goes a long way to makes these techniques more relatable.
King Vegeta being here is just fun. Not only is his karmatic afterlife ordeal a nice spin on events. But also having him provide important context via his conversation with Tarble was a nice touch. The kings motivations are all skewed. It's outside his control. and it's just what he deserves after all this time!
King Kai confirms he does not teleport, so no "I could've taught you instant transmission if you asked" bull shit!
And lastly. TOMORROW?! I KNEW this would escalate quickly but DAMN. they barely learned what they came there to learn. The odds are stacked so against them, can't wait to see more!
Chumpchangedraws
3/27/2023 c58 
1thewittywhy
Yay! More of one of my favorite stories! Better late than never.
At this point, I’m not sure if Vegeta will live. I don’t think this version would fight for anyone but himself.
Poor Raditz. Dude can’t catch a break.
1thewittywhyYay! More of one of my favorite stories! Better late than never.
At this point, I’m not sure if Vegeta will live. I don’t think this version would fight for anyone but himself.
Poor Raditz. Dude can’t catch a break.
3/27/2023 c58 5savitarsurffer
I have a question, will King Vegeta come back to life? I know it's evil but you have to admit that it would be funny to see Vegeta's face before his mother and father alive
5savitarsurfferI have a question, will King Vegeta come back to life? I know it's evil but you have to admit that it would be funny to see Vegeta's face before his mother and father alive
3/25/2023 c57 Guest
I love this story! I always wondered what it would be like if the universe 6 saiyans were born in universe 7 and you executed it so well. Love the relationship and chemistry for Goku and Caulifla. (#1 OTP 4Ever) Also, I like your version of Chichi way, WAY more than I ever liked the canon one. (Though that isn't very hard for me at all because I despise her with a burning passion.) Making her become a student of the Crane school training under Shen and turning into a saiyan through a dragon ball wish was are both very interesting ideas! Soya is a good name for her. I love her chemistry with Raditz, even if I am normally opposed to her being in a relationship with anyone because of my usual hatred of her but i'll make an exception for your Chichi/Soya. Don't listen to these douchebags in the other comments, they're just mad that you're using japanese words in an english fanfic and that's pretty racist imo. Another is saying that this fanfic is barely different from the canon version of the story, but I think they just didn't bother to read it and were desperate to leave a hate comment because there is plenty of differences. Keep up the good work!
I love this story! I always wondered what it would be like if the universe 6 saiyans were born in universe 7 and you executed it so well. Love the relationship and chemistry for Goku and Caulifla. (#1 OTP 4Ever) Also, I like your version of Chichi way, WAY more than I ever liked the canon one. (Though that isn't very hard for me at all because I despise her with a burning passion.) Making her become a student of the Crane school training under Shen and turning into a saiyan through a dragon ball wish was are both very interesting ideas! Soya is a good name for her. I love her chemistry with Raditz, even if I am normally opposed to her being in a relationship with anyone because of my usual hatred of her but i'll make an exception for your Chichi/Soya. Don't listen to these douchebags in the other comments, they're just mad that you're using japanese words in an english fanfic and that's pretty racist imo. Another is saying that this fanfic is barely different from the canon version of the story, but I think they just didn't bother to read it and were desperate to leave a hate comment because there is plenty of differences. Keep up the good work!
3/21/2023 c2 L
Hope it won't be abandoned(
Hope it won't be abandoned(
3/7/2023 c57 Rikoboi
Really liking the story so far, hoping that Kale and Caulifla get a rivalry going on like Vegeta and Goku do once they meet.
Really liking the story so far, hoping that Kale and Caulifla get a rivalry going on like Vegeta and Goku do once they meet.
3/3/2023 c57 Larro44-LL
This story was actually pretty amazing that I ended up binging it. Too bad it’s not continued
This story was actually pretty amazing that I ended up binging it. Too bad it’s not continued
1/18/2023 c1 2Orumon
A large number of very good ideas were handled here. I do like the divergences, especially as the next phase is likely to feature many, what with Vegeta III deciding to throw his oar in.
2OrumonA large number of very good ideas were handled here. I do like the divergences, especially as the next phase is likely to feature many, what with Vegeta III deciding to throw his oar in.
1/15/2023 c57 William
I enjoy your attention to detail trying to fill in gaps of the original a new spin to a great series I hope you manage to complete.
I enjoy your attention to detail trying to fill in gaps of the original a new spin to a great series I hope you manage to complete.
1/8/2023 c16 16Chmia
I thought this was just going to be a retelling with Caulifa hitching a ride, but I appreciate the effort you've put into making different things happen, particularly characterization (Roshi trying to kick a bad habit, training for Lunch and Bulma, a Goku that's a bit quicker on the uptake) that still seems within reach.
16ChmiaI thought this was just going to be a retelling with Caulifa hitching a ride, but I appreciate the effort you've put into making different things happen, particularly characterization (Roshi trying to kick a bad habit, training for Lunch and Bulma, a Goku that's a bit quicker on the uptake) that still seems within reach.