
1/3/2023 c56 NovaXNK
OH I JUST NOTICED I MADE AN ERROR IN MY COMMENT THE OTHER DAY 人参 means ginseng not carrot lol
OH I JUST NOTICED I MADE AN ERROR IN MY COMMENT THE OTHER DAY 人参 means ginseng not carrot lol
1/2/2023 c57 NovaXNK
i couldn't help myself and ended up reading more, this story deserves so much more attention, once again thanks for writing this masterpiece.
i couldn't help myself and ended up reading more, this story deserves so much more attention, once again thanks for writing this masterpiece.
1/2/2023 c53 NovaXNK
I'm going to stop reading here and check back on this when theres more chapters so ill have more to read. and i just wanna say THANK YOU for writing this masterpiece, i think this is truly my favorite fic of all time c:
I'm going to stop reading here and check back on this when theres more chapters so ill have more to read. and i just wanna say THANK YOU for writing this masterpiece, i think this is truly my favorite fic of all time c:
12/3/2022 c51 Dinodogst
Mad so naother character is added in to ensure that canon continues realitvely unchanged. I don't know why I read so much of this story, it's basically just canon with slightly altered dialog, and any potential change form califlas presence is immediately counter balanced by some other change, making her effectively flavour text as far as the impact she has on the story. Im out.
Mad so naother character is added in to ensure that canon continues realitvely unchanged. I don't know why I read so much of this story, it's basically just canon with slightly altered dialog, and any potential change form califlas presence is immediately counter balanced by some other change, making her effectively flavour text as far as the impact she has on the story. Im out.
11/28/2022 c17 Dinodogst
Why did you change korin to Karin? Your insistency on using the English phonetics of the Japanese techniques at least made some sense, even if it's annoying, but I don't understand Karin at all.
Why did you change korin to Karin? Your insistency on using the English phonetics of the Japanese techniques at least made some sense, even if it's annoying, but I don't understand Karin at all.
11/20/2022 c57 Bagels
Day 48 of waiting for the newest chapter.
I have compiled a table of when the chapters were released, and how many days were in between. The average time between each chapter is 17.5 days. In 2020, there were 38 chapters, averaging at 9.5 days in between. 2021 had 10 chapters , average of 31 days in between. 2022 has 8 chapters, averaging at 36.25 days in between. The least time between a chapter was 1 day, and most was 133 days. Chapter 57 was posted exactly 1000 days after chapter 1.
Day 48 of waiting for the newest chapter.
I have compiled a table of when the chapters were released, and how many days were in between. The average time between each chapter is 17.5 days. In 2020, there were 38 chapters, averaging at 9.5 days in between. 2021 had 10 chapters , average of 31 days in between. 2022 has 8 chapters, averaging at 36.25 days in between. The least time between a chapter was 1 day, and most was 133 days. Chapter 57 was posted exactly 1000 days after chapter 1.
10/27/2022 c57
12mastercheif1229
Incredible story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope that you update this again soon!

Incredible story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope that you update this again soon!
10/25/2022 c57 Race101
Really great story I cant wait for more I hope we see more of bardock and gine. And will goku be more powerful since he has a training partner and how will vegeta be convinced to fight for the good fight and when's the next chapter going to be.
Really great story I cant wait for more I hope we see more of bardock and gine. And will goku be more powerful since he has a training partner and how will vegeta be convinced to fight for the good fight and when's the next chapter going to be.
10/21/2022 c41 ShineX
You know ironically despite the evil intent Chichi is right in the wish she wants to get if she wants to actually keep up. Those power ups get insane later on lol
You know ironically despite the evil intent Chichi is right in the wish she wants to get if she wants to actually keep up. Those power ups get insane later on lol
10/21/2022 c40 ShineX
This should change a LOT of things. Bardock was pretty powerful to begin with, so if you still have Frieza around it's going to need an explanation. Beyond that their race is rather inclined towards destruction, and I really can't see king Vegeta being a good guy, so it's going to take a lot to make a good saiyan race.
This should change a LOT of things. Bardock was pretty powerful to begin with, so if you still have Frieza around it's going to need an explanation. Beyond that their race is rather inclined towards destruction, and I really can't see king Vegeta being a good guy, so it's going to take a lot to make a good saiyan race.