for Carrots and Cauliflowers10/21/2022 c27 ShineX
The reason for them learning how to fly is eh, but whatever I guess. Nicely done :)
The reason for them learning how to fly is eh, but whatever I guess. Nicely done :)
10/21/2022 c23 ShineX
That last line is great, and I definitely appreciate Gohan actually mentioning the spaceship. Good job :)
That last line is great, and I definitely appreciate Gohan actually mentioning the spaceship. Good job :)
10/21/2022 c20 ShineX
Having Checka wandering about doing tech stuff like they have her doing in DBZ Kakarot would be kind of cool, I approve :)
Having Checka wandering about doing tech stuff like they have her doing in DBZ Kakarot would be kind of cool, I approve :)
10/21/2022 c19 ShineX
I'd say Gero has less reason to hate him actually, but I can see him hating Goku intensely regardless. Having his family be alive though should make some interesting changes to the android arc though. Android 16 at the least shouldn't be the same, and he'd either despise his family or long for them.
I'd say Gero has less reason to hate him actually, but I can see him hating Goku intensely regardless. Having his family be alive though should make some interesting changes to the android arc though. Android 16 at the least shouldn't be the same, and he'd either despise his family or long for them.
10/20/2022 c14 ShineX
Well done lol. Of course the question in my mind is why they don't just go back for Bulma's actual items, but whatever I guess.
Well done lol. Of course the question in my mind is why they don't just go back for Bulma's actual items, but whatever I guess.
10/20/2022 c11 ShineX
I admit I'm enjoying this even is I know it's something of a retelling. Goku should have an easier time with someone having his back, and I'm glad to see that happening so far :)
I admit I'm enjoying this even is I know it's something of a retelling. Goku should have an easier time with someone having his back, and I'm glad to see that happening so far :)
10/20/2022 c7 ShineX
I admit, I'd like for once to have Goku learn to control the transformation. You know it's possible because it's shown in canon, so learning how or wishing it should be the way to go. Ah well, hopefully you go that route. Nicely done so far.
I admit, I'd like for once to have Goku learn to control the transformation. You know it's possible because it's shown in canon, so learning how or wishing it should be the way to go. Ah well, hopefully you go that route. Nicely done so far.
10/16/2022 c32 NibberWithAHardR
This is retarded two Saiyan's training together should make their growth explode so much faster that they should both individually be stronger than Young King Piccolo already BARE MINIMUM. Cya
This is retarded two Saiyan's training together should make their growth explode so much faster that they should both individually be stronger than Young King Piccolo already BARE MINIMUM. Cya
10/16/2022 c19 NibberWithAHardR
"BĀSUTO!"
That's literally just her saying "burst" you dotard for fuck's same.
"BĀSUTO!"
That's literally just her saying "burst" you dotard for fuck's same.
10/16/2022 c7 NibberWithAHardR
PLEASE stop using japanese in places where it shouldn't be used. Saying fucking "Rogafufuken" over "Wolf Fang Fist" is retarded and awful. Only use Japanese when the dubs would. You can't even spell the damn names right. Her name is Ranfan in Japanese, not Ran Fuan, not to mention reading "Kuririn" is also fucking awful.
PLEASE stop using japanese in places where it shouldn't be used. Saying fucking "Rogafufuken" over "Wolf Fang Fist" is retarded and awful. Only use Japanese when the dubs would. You can't even spell the damn names right. Her name is Ranfan in Japanese, not Ran Fuan, not to mention reading "Kuririn" is also fucking awful.
10/7/2022 c57 
2GM10
Now Caulifla and Goku know how Geets would be with a beard.
Family Reunion 2, with royalty included.
2GM10Now Caulifla and Goku know how Geets would be with a beard.
Family Reunion 2, with royalty included.
10/5/2022 c57 777torn777
I’ve always liked the idea of some people avoiding the reincarnation cycle by being on good behavior. Adds a element of potential redemption
I’ve always liked the idea of some people avoiding the reincarnation cycle by being on good behavior. Adds a element of potential redemption