
2/22/2020 c9
6danielmcfilms
and the phsyco yandere makes a aperance. It's gonna be interesting to see what plans she's gonna get up to in this fic.

and the phsyco yandere makes a aperance. It's gonna be interesting to see what plans she's gonna get up to in this fic.
2/22/2020 c9
29Parcasious
Love the premise of this story and the writing is also enjoyable. It's not every day I find a new DBZ story and this has potential- Good luck and have fun writing it

Love the premise of this story and the writing is also enjoyable. It's not every day I find a new DBZ story and this has potential- Good luck and have fun writing it
2/22/2020 c9 Guest
You're father was an average warrior, but a brilliant scientist!
You're father was an average warrior, but a brilliant scientist!
2/22/2020 c9
1thewittywhy
This chapter makes me happy. Nice character growth, as well as Chichi being taken down a peg.

This chapter makes me happy. Nice character growth, as well as Chichi being taken down a peg.
2/18/2020 c8 BoredKing
This is amazing. Goku and Caulifa are cute together. Wonder how close to canon your gonna stick, because with 2 saiyans training together and mastering their Oozaru forms then their gonna be significantly stronger by the time Piccolo shows up. Admittedly Dragon Ball is one of the few shows where sticking closely to canon isn't bad, so do whatever floats your boat so long as it stays this good.
This is amazing. Goku and Caulifa are cute together. Wonder how close to canon your gonna stick, because with 2 saiyans training together and mastering their Oozaru forms then their gonna be significantly stronger by the time Piccolo shows up. Admittedly Dragon Ball is one of the few shows where sticking closely to canon isn't bad, so do whatever floats your boat so long as it stays this good.
2/15/2020 c8
1Corpj123
One of my current favorite fanfiction to read. I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

One of my current favorite fanfiction to read. I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
2/15/2020 c8 Guest
I absolutely love this story, one of the few that I can say I can't wait for the next release lol. Though I am dissapointed that the tournament has ended already, there is so much to look forward to in the story I feel like.
Are you going to address the Chichi issue sooner than canon did? And, not that my input matters, but I don't really "hate" chichi so I hope you won't completely trash her whenever you do get to it... That said, Goku x Caulifla all the way!
I absolutely love this story, one of the few that I can say I can't wait for the next release lol. Though I am dissapointed that the tournament has ended already, there is so much to look forward to in the story I feel like.
Are you going to address the Chichi issue sooner than canon did? And, not that my input matters, but I don't really "hate" chichi so I hope you won't completely trash her whenever you do get to it... That said, Goku x Caulifla all the way!
2/15/2020 c8
6danielmcfilms
I like how you remebered how Monster Carrot actually died when Roshi blew up the moon.

I like how you remebered how Monster Carrot actually died when Roshi blew up the moon.
2/15/2020 c8 Guest
Continue
Continue
2/15/2020 c8
1thewittywhy
Yay! Another fun chapter. So much can happen in the few months they have before the balls reactivate. This shall be enjoyable. :3

Yay! Another fun chapter. So much can happen in the few months they have before the balls reactivate. This shall be enjoyable. :3
2/15/2020 c7 Caspian123
Is Chi-Chi gonna pop up soon? Would be funny to se her and Caulifla feuding over Goku.
I don't think that wishing for their tails to dissapear is the way to go. Maybe Caulifla and Goku can try to gain control of the transformation.
Is Chi-Chi gonna pop up soon? Would be funny to se her and Caulifla feuding over Goku.
I don't think that wishing for their tails to dissapear is the way to go. Maybe Caulifla and Goku can try to gain control of the transformation.
2/12/2020 c7
6danielmcfilms
I can't wait until uni 7 Caulifla meets uni 6 Caluifla if she even exists in this... Multiverse?
That is even if you decided to go that far

I can't wait until uni 7 Caulifla meets uni 6 Caluifla if she even exists in this... Multiverse?
That is even if you decided to go that far