for Carrots and Cauliflowers6/8/2023 c1 Ravensflock
Can’t lie lost intrest when I seen you make a shit load of saiyans survive. Makes the whole goku and cauliflower both sent to earth to survive really pointless and redundant
Can’t lie lost intrest when I seen you make a shit load of saiyans survive. Makes the whole goku and cauliflower both sent to earth to survive really pointless and redundant
6/8/2023 c59 
2GM10
Nice episode, the space monkes that are still working (for now) for the ice demon arrived to Earth, Kale just watches, Yamcha almost got Yamcha'd, and do I see a liiiittle smidge of a crush on Krillin from Jica?
Now to see what happens, on the next DRAGON. BALL. ZEE!
2GM10Nice episode, the space monkes that are still working (for now) for the ice demon arrived to Earth, Kale just watches, Yamcha almost got Yamcha'd, and do I see a liiiittle smidge of a crush on Krillin from Jica?
Now to see what happens, on the next DRAGON. BALL. ZEE!
6/8/2023 c59 Delta3950
I know headaches all too well I live with my has been dad, he's beaten his body so much he can't do half the stuff that needs to be done. After a month of being down we finally got a AC belt on our Trailblazer it took a lot of frustration with our local parts dealer because the dumb aces kept trying to give us the wrong part. We had to buy a new AC Belt Tensioner, get it put on followed by its new belt and the original serpentine belt. Now when dad puts the AC on full blast the damn thing is squealing so either the clutch is going, quite possible considering how often we tried running AC without realizing it didn't have a belt, or the condenser is going. We're hoping it's just the clutch, the only effing problem is that I can't find instructions be it on youtube or the net in general that explains how to replace an AC clutch on a 2005 Chevy Trailblazer with a 5.3L Vortec Engine it's downright maddening.
On the topic of your story, it's a good chapter, though I consider Yamcha getting blown up by a Saibaman to be the butt of the joke it's actually kind of amusing all things considered.
I know headaches all too well I live with my has been dad, he's beaten his body so much he can't do half the stuff that needs to be done. After a month of being down we finally got a AC belt on our Trailblazer it took a lot of frustration with our local parts dealer because the dumb aces kept trying to give us the wrong part. We had to buy a new AC Belt Tensioner, get it put on followed by its new belt and the original serpentine belt. Now when dad puts the AC on full blast the damn thing is squealing so either the clutch is going, quite possible considering how often we tried running AC without realizing it didn't have a belt, or the condenser is going. We're hoping it's just the clutch, the only effing problem is that I can't find instructions be it on youtube or the net in general that explains how to replace an AC clutch on a 2005 Chevy Trailblazer with a 5.3L Vortec Engine it's downright maddening.
On the topic of your story, it's a good chapter, though I consider Yamcha getting blown up by a Saibaman to be the butt of the joke it's actually kind of amusing all things considered.
6/7/2023 c59 1thewittywhy
Oh thank Kami, Yamcha is okay.
I like how you built up the peace and business of the city before everything went Hiroshima.
I'm really not sure if Vegeta will make it out of this. If people can be spared death like Yamcha, people can get dead as well.
Plus, Vegeta at this stage would definitely sell out his people for his personal gain. The dude was a complete psychopath throughout Z.
1thewittywhyOh thank Kami, Yamcha is okay.
I like how you built up the peace and business of the city before everything went Hiroshima.
I'm really not sure if Vegeta will make it out of this. If people can be spared death like Yamcha, people can get dead as well.
Plus, Vegeta at this stage would definitely sell out his people for his personal gain. The dude was a complete psychopath throughout Z.
5/26/2023 c58 3Pinkypi
Hope you are doing well author-san! This has been great to read again :3 and then to catch up with the chapters I hadn't read. Though I do wonder when Goku and Kaulifla are going to tap into the same power Kale does since they've had 5 years to work on it now and they completely forgot it's existence fighting their brothers xD
3PinkypiHope you are doing well author-san! This has been great to read again :3 and then to catch up with the chapters I hadn't read. Though I do wonder when Goku and Kaulifla are going to tap into the same power Kale does since they've had 5 years to work on it now and they completely forgot it's existence fighting their brothers xD
5/26/2023 c57 Pinkypi
I'm honestly glad they dealt neither with hell or the snake princess. I couldn't see them falling themselves when they can fly.
Also King Vegeta? Heeeeh~ this means that both of them should be quite a bit above what Goku achieved on his own xD.
I'm honestly glad they dealt neither with hell or the snake princess. I couldn't see them falling themselves when they can fly.
Also King Vegeta? Heeeeh~ this means that both of them should be quite a bit above what Goku achieved on his own xD.
5/16/2023 c43 Tomahawk5763
Can you start this again and have it go all the way to the tournament of power
Can you start this again and have it go all the way to the tournament of power
5/11/2023 c1 1youhateme
When you said your reason was the chaos theory, that had me rolling. W first chapter can’t wait to read all of this.
1youhatemeWhen you said your reason was the chaos theory, that had me rolling. W first chapter can’t wait to read all of this.
4/20/2023 c58 HayaiKami
Hi Its a Great fanfic i cant wait for the next chapter.
Its one if the best fanfics i read and i read a lot. Its Easy to read and a lot that happend in the Story is understandble and relateble. You implented everything good. What i dont understand is how the saiyans are alive but even that made Sense like i could See it happen. You made dragonball truly your Own and made a Great and relaible Story i cant wait to See more of you.
Sorry i miss spellt anything english is not my naitive Language.
-HayaiKami
Hi Its a Great fanfic i cant wait for the next chapter.
Its one if the best fanfics i read and i read a lot. Its Easy to read and a lot that happend in the Story is understandble and relateble. You implented everything good. What i dont understand is how the saiyans are alive but even that made Sense like i could See it happen. You made dragonball truly your Own and made a Great and relaible Story i cant wait to See more of you.
Sorry i miss spellt anything english is not my naitive Language.
-HayaiKami
3/31/2023 c58 Eddy
I only found and read this fanfic last year and I must say its a great story and im glad it got updated and the chapter is great. Keep up the great work and onto the next chapter then.
I only found and read this fanfic last year and I must say its a great story and im glad it got updated and the chapter is great. Keep up the great work and onto the next chapter then.
3/27/2023 c58 Bucio
No problem, it is understood that you are busy with other things
As for the chapter, we are in the prelude to the confrontation against Vegeta and his squad, although the presence of the spirit of Vegeta's father is curious, helping to train Caulifla and Goku, who is upset to learn that their goal is to face his son. , but calming down, being able to talk to his other son, Tarbles
and after making the calculations, a nervous Kaio tells them that Vegeta and the others are one day away, so Caulifla and Goku rush back, hoping to arrive on time.
Let's see how different this version is from the first meeting between Goku and Vegeta.
Good luck and keep it up
No problem, it is understood that you are busy with other things
As for the chapter, we are in the prelude to the confrontation against Vegeta and his squad, although the presence of the spirit of Vegeta's father is curious, helping to train Caulifla and Goku, who is upset to learn that their goal is to face his son. , but calming down, being able to talk to his other son, Tarbles
and after making the calculations, a nervous Kaio tells them that Vegeta and the others are one day away, so Caulifla and Goku rush back, hoping to arrive on time.
Let's see how different this version is from the first meeting between Goku and Vegeta.
Good luck and keep it up