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1/16/2020 c1 23Noctus Fury
Well done! Glad to see another poet! This is similar to my one-shot that I wrote for Gollum/Smeagol called "My Birthday Present". How fascinating! :-)

Thank you for writing this and for sharing this with us. Hope you have a great and productive week!

Long Live the Night!

Noctus Fury
1/10/2020 c1 21Psycho Tangerine
Poor Smeagol never intended to become Gollum, that ring entrapped his mind. "Burried" should be "buried".
1/9/2020 c1 48megSUPERFAN
Only one thing I found to fix: "Loved far batter" instead of "love".
But overall, great job on this! I always love seeing Smeagol poetry, and you really bring out the fact of the Ring's lure for Gollum in this poem.

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