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8/30 c1 nalakahansato
You should keep writing this... It's wonderful that people are writing about the newest region, and trust me, only brief mentions of Galar have been in other stories.
8/9 c1 zero fullbuster
love it.
please write more soon.
2/17 c1 31Fires of Eden Red Rose Aurora
Umm, I don't really get this, you need more explanation and line breaks. Also, the grammar could be better and shield is spelt wrong, as is Cilan. When Ash as the vision, the 'friends' should be for example when they spoke: "" Max said, looking disappointed. or something like that.
Good try, but maybe go back and make the chapter longer with more detail and stuff. Look at over stories such as Traveller or any other fic written similar to get an idea of your not sure.
Hope this helps, and all the best. I'll be watching.
1/10 c1 Wonder
[As for the user himself, he is actually but one of literally more than 20 sockpuppet accounts belonging to Blades of Chance. And yes, he will further mob this story with more sockpuppets and more drama in response to this review. Likely with signed reviews that you can't delete.]

Yeah no this is bullshit. The claims about Warhammer/GenX being Blades is made up Farla who only did it in order to slander her for fighting them.

Blades is a girl, and there are not 20 sockpuppets. There are twenty users who joined to fight her.
1/10 c1 Guest
Not a fan of betrayal fanfics but this is a good start but please list of who are the traitors and who are the non traitors so that way it can be a betrayal fanfic that can be story to read.
1/10 c1 Guest
Please update
1/9 c1 1SunMoon6798
Hey, welcome. So look a warning given you are writing a Pokemon story. Farla, St Elmo's Fire, Talarc, Spencer841, AshxSelene Writer, fanficmanager816, and a few others are known bullies on this site who review only to destroy stories and promote drama.

They will push their believes down your throat, demand you redo your story to fit their wants and no, they are the super minority and hated by the fandom. They also tend to post pms publicly so responding to them is ill advised.

They start off with a disclaimer about honestly thinking it would help. It doesn't they want you to be screwed over as they complain about trival nonsense that got their panties in a twist.

They think Pokemon is slavery. That you should capitalize the way they want, fyi Pokemon names are not species names (but actual names according to game freak) and that's been officially recongized in modern English. So yes it's correct to capitalize Pikachu for instance. Oh, and they give out false dialogue formatting (It's "Hello," She said dialogue is a seperate sentence). Spend time putting out a text block of non issues that are not going to help you. Don't get me started on Arceus.

What's worse is they all try to pass it off as them being critics in their reviews. Any review with it in the begining should be ignored if you get it.

Oh and if they say that they are being bullied. Know that they are lying as they been doing it too this fandom for years now and are just pissed that a group are working to stop it. The admins told them to knock it off.

If that's not enough on my profile is proof its utter nonsense. oh and if there is a guest reviewer titled "Take Down Hybrid" know that is's actually Handle Criticism Maturely the biggest of all of Farla's supporters and an utter troll who only doing this shit because Hybrid gave her criticism. The girls gone off the deep end and into complete insanity.

Best to remove it.

Speaking of them they had twice agreed to stop but don't. Even after being told to stop by the admins, their friends, and even random strangers. Right now they are somehow convinced that Hybrid, a woman, is a man.

If they claim they have proof don't. Its all utter nonsense land they been told by the admins to take it down.

As for the users you need to block and how, you block by heading to heading too the toolbar were you posted a story. Click on account and you should see the option to block users. Then add their id numbers







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