
6/15/2020 c20 Cainabel202
Hand down the best fanfic on damachi I have ever red. I'll be waiting for the next chapter ! Keep up the good job...
Hand down the best fanfic on damachi I have ever red. I'll be waiting for the next chapter ! Keep up the good job...
6/12/2020 c20 Nicky
Well done! Hope you update soon! :)
Well done! Hope you update soon! :)
6/11/2020 c20 Guest
good and nice story ,although i which it could be longer but other than that its great!
good and nice story ,although i which it could be longer but other than that its great!
6/10/2020 c1 Chaz
I thought this story was not going to be updated thankfully I was wrong another great chapter can’t wait until the next chapter comes out
I thought this story was not going to be updated thankfully I was wrong another great chapter can’t wait until the next chapter comes out
6/9/2020 c20 Noone
Nice chapter, and like always a good read.
That promise though feels pretty ominous... The most simple minded thing would be to request bell to kill Ais but that's a bit too simplistic imho. I'm sure that you've come up with something much more sly for what it's going to be though, your seem too much of a good righter to do something that simplistic.
And can't wait for the reaction of Loki and the executives to bells acthions, it's nice foreshadowing with bell being caught read handed by shakti.
Well thank you for the grate story so far and will be waiting for the next instalment whenever :)
Nice chapter, and like always a good read.
That promise though feels pretty ominous... The most simple minded thing would be to request bell to kill Ais but that's a bit too simplistic imho. I'm sure that you've come up with something much more sly for what it's going to be though, your seem too much of a good righter to do something that simplistic.
And can't wait for the reaction of Loki and the executives to bells acthions, it's nice foreshadowing with bell being caught read handed by shakti.
Well thank you for the grate story so far and will be waiting for the next instalment whenever :)
6/10/2020 c1 alosomph
This deserves attention. Well written and an interesting concept. Love to read more.
This deserves attention. Well written and an interesting concept. Love to read more.
6/10/2020 c20
1Dxrshan
This chapter was a journey. The tension of the fight, the epic ness, the confusion in what to expect with Freya and her deal, the humour of the sacred words: beGONE THOT, and the warmth of the conclusion.
But I don’t understand why Shakti and ganesha’s familia interacted with Bell, this might be random but I have a feeling there’s a reason why she recognised Bell and we’ll see more of them in the future maybe?
Nevertheless, I wonder what will be the lasting effects of Bell dealing with Ishtar’s familia, so I look forward to the next chapter!

This chapter was a journey. The tension of the fight, the epic ness, the confusion in what to expect with Freya and her deal, the humour of the sacred words: beGONE THOT, and the warmth of the conclusion.
But I don’t understand why Shakti and ganesha’s familia interacted with Bell, this might be random but I have a feeling there’s a reason why she recognised Bell and we’ll see more of them in the future maybe?
Nevertheless, I wonder what will be the lasting effects of Bell dealing with Ishtar’s familia, so I look forward to the next chapter!