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2/17/2016 c1 Sarah
Maybe one of the deaths should be getting electrocuted in a hot tub
4/13/2004 c1 1XxXxeternalsunshinexXxX
I really like it. You have talent and a potentially great fic. Keep it comin'! xE.Sx
12/17/2003 c1 7Ichabod Cullen
Its pretty good but you should have more detail and more of who the charechters are before the explosion ather than that it's great
7/23/2003 c1 t-rex-861
Well, this needs some work, but it definitely looks as though you tried to make something good here, compared to other authors who get bored and decide to post stuff that they just invent off the top of their heads. First of all, an intro would be good. I think you should take the time to properly introduce all the characters, and then move on to the scary/premonition stuff. You also need to check your spelling. You had Heidi right at the beginning, but then it became Hiedi, and that is not how you write the name. There were also other mistakes. Also, I think it would help if you added more description, made it longer. It doesn't need to be rushed. Please understand that this is not a flame, it is merely constructive criticism. In fact, I think this story has potential. You seem to have a good imagination, and already I saw some differences in you characters' personalities. I'll probably come back if you write more. Remember : don't rush, describe events more thoroughly, but you're off to a start!
5/19/2003 c1 2shawn4542
You have a couple of spelling errors you need to take care of. but over all its good. you should try a different point of veiw. and explain things more. you need more description. shameless plug: check out my Final Destination: Crossover new nightmare. But seriously more description. i'll continue to read okay. i want to see it develop

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