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1/15/2020 c1 2scrandle
interesting. I like this premise, and even though the chapter ended abruptly, it was pretty solid. I'm looking forward to seeing what this OC has to say about the shinobi world, and what the plot might be. Good luck!
1/12/2020 c1 Anon
Looking foward for future updates. Keep it up
1/13/2020 c1 cyboot
interesting start, though 8 years seems too long for the hokage to not have ever talked to him or the amount of training/learning he's apparently done...
as mentioned itachi and kakashi were even more advanced at a young age and they didn't have the benefit of having the mind and training of a supersoldier from birth...

i'd expect him to be around half his age (4 maybe 5) when having a conversation like that with the hokage while having learned about the same as mentioned here

basicly, if kakashi can graduate at 5, than a reborn spartan should be able to do so at 4
1/12/2020 c1 lovefanfictions72
first time looking through the just in section of this fanfiction site. Im disappointed. Why? because i wish that i found this story later on.. maybe a few months or even a year from now.. because then i wouldent read such a good beggining to a story only to be immensely disappointed that there isnt more. Great beginning. I do hope you write often! you seem to be very talented. Didnt have a good day today... wierdly... reading this has made it better.. thank you

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