for His Body is Made of Swords8/26 c22 Guest
I started reading this again because I remembered the concept of the story. Big mistake. I had forgotten how convoluted and untenable it becomes. And to top that off, Archer/Emiya does literally nothing to improve himself for the grail war that he is fully aware is coming.
I started reading this again because I remembered the concept of the story. Big mistake. I had forgotten how convoluted and untenable it becomes. And to top that off, Archer/Emiya does literally nothing to improve himself for the grail war that he is fully aware is coming.
8/12 c1 ChaldeasMatsu
Thanks for writing all these stories. Currently on a binge of your content and the different tones I've experienced from you has been a really nice experience.
Thanks for writing all these stories. Currently on a binge of your content and the different tones I've experienced from you has been a really nice experience.
7/18 c22 Guest
Last two chapters were bummers. I expected more. I expected better. All that waiting to see him do something interesting, you make him get packed on the first serious confrontation. Tsk tsk tsk.
Last two chapters were bummers. I expected more. I expected better. All that waiting to see him do something interesting, you make him get packed on the first serious confrontation. Tsk tsk tsk.
7/18 c15 Guest
Getting time-skip vibes. Oorah! Long, but well not really that long, awaited..
Getting time-skip vibes. Oorah! Long, but well not really that long, awaited..
7/18 c11 Guest
Aaaaaaaand I'm already sick and bored of this kiddy shit. As patient as I could possibly be, there's only so many times I can take the "mc-passes-out-because-his-body-cant-handle-his-skills" thing in stories. If this is a recurring thing, hopefully in several years, if you decide to even continue this, I'll drop by and skip all of this Child Arc. Cause I'm rapidly losing interest in it.
Aaaaaaaand I'm already sick and bored of this kiddy shit. As patient as I could possibly be, there's only so many times I can take the "mc-passes-out-because-his-body-cant-handle-his-skills" thing in stories. If this is a recurring thing, hopefully in several years, if you decide to even continue this, I'll drop by and skip all of this Child Arc. Cause I'm rapidly losing interest in it.
7/18 c6 Guest
I don't know how to feel about the Aria thing. I don't really know how they work but one would think that he would already instinctually know the rest of it. You know, because it's so personal of a thing. The fact that it's changed so drastically and he only actually knows the first line is very off putting to me. It is what it is at the end of the day, but it will bug me.
I don't know how to feel about the Aria thing. I don't really know how they work but one would think that he would already instinctually know the rest of it. You know, because it's so personal of a thing. The fact that it's changed so drastically and he only actually knows the first line is very off putting to me. It is what it is at the end of the day, but it will bug me.
7/18 c1 Guest
Wooooooaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh what just happened? So because his ideals took a change, he became a whole different person to Alaya? That whole ending grasped my brain and started playing basketball with it. But I don't mean that in a negative way. I think this is cool so far.
Wooooooaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh what just happened? So because his ideals took a change, he became a whole different person to Alaya? That whole ending grasped my brain and started playing basketball with it. But I don't mean that in a negative way. I think this is cool so far.
7/5 c22 Guest
Both Shirou and Emiya use a reality marble they could potentially be an exception from the "DAA deny human history rule".
I mean they can call out the true name of the NP they use and considering that Nasuverse lore generally tends to be convoluted and full of retcons you could just ignore it.
This is a fanfic so what rules apply and don't is up to the author and what story he/she wants to tell.
Besides ignoring the "deny human history rule" allows for greater story telling potential.
Both Shirou and Emiya use a reality marble they could potentially be an exception from the "DAA deny human history rule".
I mean they can call out the true name of the NP they use and considering that Nasuverse lore generally tends to be convoluted and full of retcons you could just ignore it.
This is a fanfic so what rules apply and don't is up to the author and what story he/she wants to tell.
Besides ignoring the "deny human history rule" allows for greater story telling potential.
7/2 c21 fitstickman
shame, as powerful as EMIYA with Noble Phantasms, they wont work on Dead Apostles. their nature rejecting human history and all
shame, as powerful as EMIYA with Noble Phantasms, they wont work on Dead Apostles. their nature rejecting human history and all
6/5 c4 GoldQuartz
An idea, if it isn't done, would be for the Archer servant being Emiya Alter, where Shirou would get his arm
An idea, if it isn't done, would be for the Archer servant being Emiya Alter, where Shirou would get his arm
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