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2/4/2020 c1 Riptide752
Love a good time travel fanfic. Can't wait for the next update
2/4/2020 c3 2HoJ Roxas
Another great Chapter!Nice.

Chibi Rin being Chibi Rin, Tsunderes man, their mystery is unfathomable. XD

Also, I somehow saw the Sakura spoiling by Raiga and the Gang coming, and it was freaking awesome and beautiful, I hope we'll get to see more small-time interactions with them

and we have first contact with Zouken, as expected, at least since he thinks he's only facing a child of a magus, EMIYA is going to have enough time to prepare, his body is nowhere near close to what his standards, and his circuits have only just been opened, it would take a while for his body to get used to them, and he would be slightly weakened during this period

Speaking of which, Although I understand he opened his circuits earlier in the day, sure EMIYA would probably handle the pain nicely, but his body would have been affected by the process, and wouldn't be operating at its optimal condition, as it's still getting used to the circuits, I believe that that particular detail should have been added.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Have a Nice Day!
2/4/2020 c3 Guest
another great chapter! chibi archer vs chibi rin on mathematic element am beginning to adore this combo more and more! On the other hand Zouken was such creepiest, hope Sakura get to live with Fuji-nee, then she will get all the love and best care from Fujinee! anywhere better than with the creep, and thanks for the update, can’t wait to see what you have for kiritsugu too
2/4/2020 c3 Guest
I am insane I actually counted the numbers of Tap. Tap. Tap. in this chapter Hahaha... she is cute! Thank you for the update, this is really good read and already looking forwards to next
2/3/2020 c3 Blaze2121
Okay after the wait I’m convinced this story is good so far I’m liking the whole archer going back in time basically a do over plus a Chibi rin that’s adorable plus little Sakura the kawi factor is over 9000 anyway I’m guessing love triangle with Sakura and rin and maybe saber unless Shirō plans to stop the grail war but that’s for the future right Chibi Shirō vs big man is interesting also just an idea any chance of him accidentally finding ruby in rins house that be funny and lead to so interesting things other then that I’m looking forward to archer retraining himself back to his old self this might be a strong Shirō we all want but first Chibi romance Commence I’m hoping the update schedule is at best one a month or two max just no 6 months for one chapter unless it’s a very long one to make up for that well till next chapter ( ps I’ll make the next review shorter this one is long mostly because I was waiting for chapter 3 before I follow and review)
2/3/2020 c3 6Bracting
You’re the best, Shirou! lmao
2/3/2020 c3 1Samin01
Thank you bro i cant wait for more
2/3/2020 c3 Guest
Nice. I cannot wait to see Shirou take that worm down.
2/3/2020 c3 Bubbahfearsome
good chapter
2/3/2020 c3 10404617
mas cap y archer no es como shiro es un planmificador frio y una espada retorcida
2/3/2020 c3 2dragonbornthesam
Is this the start of big bro Shirou? Will Zouken be turned into mulch. Will Sakura find comfort in Shirou? Will the chains of fate break free? Find out next time on "His body is made of swords, Ch:4"
1/27/2020 c1 Spirito1987
So Archer got save via Conceptual logic huh?
The Shirou Emiya with the exact aria of
"I am the Bone of My Sword,
Steel is my body, and fire is my blood,
I have created over a thousand blades,
Unknown to Death,
nor known to life,
Have withstood pain to create many weapons,
yet, those hands will never hold anything,
So, as I pray
Unlimited Blade Works"
to summon UBW will always become a CG no matter what but since Archer here fundamentally changed himself to the point of not recognizing his own aria means he was able to achieve the paradox result he wanted, not the way he envisioned it though.

By technically becoming a version of Shirou Emiya that doesn't hold the aria above, he became an unknown to the Counter Force since it now recognizes him as another version of Shirou Emiya instead of normal CG Emiya.
1/23/2020 c2 Guest
Hell! This chapter is killing me! chibi archer chibi sakura chibi rin...
1/23/2020 c2 Guest
Please tell us you will continue this story! Keep going, a great start thanks for posting this
1/23/2020 c2 Guest
Is this... Is this the mythical Illya route?!
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