for Angels Under Fire8/12/2020 c2 SALAZAR-DREAM
Interesting start, poor Lucas what is wrong with him? Carly is all trouble & hopefully Sam won't take it. Love my Dream pairing
Interesting start, poor Lucas what is wrong with him? Carly is all trouble & hopefully Sam won't take it. Love my Dream pairing
7/19/2020 c2 arcoiris0502
I hope that Lucas will be fine but it looks like he's very sick. Carly sounds like she's still a problem. Jason needs to start standing up to her and AJ. Robin knows that Jason is interested in Elizabeth and he's not that old. Lol
I hope that Lucas will be fine but it looks like he's very sick. Carly sounds like she's still a problem. Jason needs to start standing up to her and AJ. Robin knows that Jason is interested in Elizabeth and he's not that old. Lol
7/19/2020 c2 
5KittyKat06
Somehow Carly having a baby in high school and then immediately thrusting responsibility for the baby onto other people does not surprise me. Yes, this is A/U, but you've made teenage Carly realistic that this girl would grow up into the narcissistic hypocrite that we know her as in real GH. So good job there.
I read your summary and I see that it is Dream and Liason, so I will accept Sam and Elizabeth being kind-of friends :P They actually did have the potential on GH to be friends if certain men hadn't gotten in the way. And I am here for anything that will pit them two together against Carly, haha.
I like the world you've created here, with the nuclear Julexis fam and Ava/Kiki having a more prominent role in their lives. (Haha, but I'm glad that Alexis immediately takes the kids away when Franco appears.) And did I read it right that in the first chapter Alexis is pregnant? Hmmm... :)
5KittyKat06Somehow Carly having a baby in high school and then immediately thrusting responsibility for the baby onto other people does not surprise me. Yes, this is A/U, but you've made teenage Carly realistic that this girl would grow up into the narcissistic hypocrite that we know her as in real GH. So good job there.
I read your summary and I see that it is Dream and Liason, so I will accept Sam and Elizabeth being kind-of friends :P They actually did have the potential on GH to be friends if certain men hadn't gotten in the way. And I am here for anything that will pit them two together against Carly, haha.
I like the world you've created here, with the nuclear Julexis fam and Ava/Kiki having a more prominent role in their lives. (Haha, but I'm glad that Alexis immediately takes the kids away when Franco appears.) And did I read it right that in the first chapter Alexis is pregnant? Hmmm... :)
7/19/2020 c2 3ghfan51184
I usually don't like fanfictions where the GH cast is in high school, but the two that I've read so far are pretty good. Both have Liason eventually being endgame, so I'm good with that.
Wow! Carly's a piece of work, and if she grew up going to High school with Sam and Elizabeth, I could picture her doing just that; smoking and making either Sam or Elizabeth take the blame for it.
Poor Lucas. I wonder what's wrong with him? I was wondering about the Priorities Sequel, and I'm glad you're working on another story. I can't wait to see what else you come up with in this story as well as the priorities sequel when you work on that again. I love your work!
3ghfan51184I usually don't like fanfictions where the GH cast is in high school, but the two that I've read so far are pretty good. Both have Liason eventually being endgame, so I'm good with that.
Wow! Carly's a piece of work, and if she grew up going to High school with Sam and Elizabeth, I could picture her doing just that; smoking and making either Sam or Elizabeth take the blame for it.
Poor Lucas. I wonder what's wrong with him? I was wondering about the Priorities Sequel, and I'm glad you're working on another story. I can't wait to see what else you come up with in this story as well as the priorities sequel when you work on that again. I love your work!
7/19/2020 c2 Chrissyfan
Really good update. I think I know where you are going with Lucas. Jason needs to grow a spine and tell his brother and the banshee to raise their own kid but you are very much keeping in line how Jason really loved Michael. Had to chuckle at the Sam/Ava stalemate on truth telling. But, it isn't as though the school won't contact Julian and Alexis if they don't hear from them. Good that Elizabeth defended Sam. I have a feeling when both Sam and Elizabeth have had enough, Carly won't have a place to hide.
I think as of right now you have captured Elizabeth post-rape. Pre-rape Elizabeth was a smoker and a bit of a hellion and lashed out when she was hurt and angry. This Elizabeth seems to fit more of the good girl persona with perhaps a bit of grit lying underneath.
I like this story so I am most pleased you are updating it.
Really good update. I think I know where you are going with Lucas. Jason needs to grow a spine and tell his brother and the banshee to raise their own kid but you are very much keeping in line how Jason really loved Michael. Had to chuckle at the Sam/Ava stalemate on truth telling. But, it isn't as though the school won't contact Julian and Alexis if they don't hear from them. Good that Elizabeth defended Sam. I have a feeling when both Sam and Elizabeth have had enough, Carly won't have a place to hide.
I think as of right now you have captured Elizabeth post-rape. Pre-rape Elizabeth was a smoker and a bit of a hellion and lashed out when she was hurt and angry. This Elizabeth seems to fit more of the good girl persona with perhaps a bit of grit lying underneath.
I like this story so I am most pleased you are updating it.
1/14/2020 c1 jrchandlerfan
Lol I’ll miss your soapbox! I enjoy reading yours and foxy’s opinions on the show.
Lol I’ll miss your soapbox! I enjoy reading yours and foxy’s opinions on the show.
1/14/2020 c1 chrissyfan
TY Chrissy- TY Foxy- bright side- I can't efficiently rant w/ one typing hand- you are both spared the soapbox for awhile.
TY Chrissy- TY Foxy- bright side- I can't efficiently rant w/ one typing hand- you are both spared the soapbox for awhile.
1/13/2020 c1 Foxyleo
Sorry to hear that ChrissyFan hope you get better soon.
Sorry to hear that ChrissyFan hope you get better soon.
1/13/2020 c1 20jrchandlerfan1
Thanks!
Aww Chrissyfan, I’m sorry to hear that! I hope you heal fast. Get lots of rest.
20jrchandlerfan1Thanks!
Aww Chrissyfan, I’m sorry to hear that! I hope you heal fast. Get lots of rest.
1/13/2020 c1 chrsisyfan
very nice start, I broke my arm yesterday so reviews might be slower coming than normal, but be certain I am still reading both stories, Off to pop a pain med and lay back down.
very nice start, I broke my arm yesterday so reviews might be slower coming than normal, but be certain I am still reading both stories, Off to pop a pain med and lay back down.
1/12/2020 c1 Foxyleo28
I had a feeling Carly was up to something when she put that pack in Sam pocket. Hopefully Liz will back her up but they still going to get in trouble. So Carly n AJ couldn’t take the baby to daycare smh.
I had a feeling Carly was up to something when she put that pack in Sam pocket. Hopefully Liz will back her up but they still going to get in trouble. So Carly n AJ couldn’t take the baby to daycare smh.