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2/24 c1 ViewerPetu
Promising start though you could use an editor or proof reader to help with typos and few awkward phrases.
1/26 c1 PEJP BengtZone V2
You do realize that unless he is half-human, he should be naturally devoid of eyes?
1/16 c1 blacksoul123
It's pretty decent I guess
1/14 c1 3OechsnerC
Awesome story. Looking forward to reading more soon.

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