for Your Memories2/1/2020 c2 
144rebecca-in-blue
This story is well-written, but the first two chapters have been very "past," only focusing on Edward's memories, with no mentions of the present Edward arriving to these places or looking around. I think that sort of framing device would help the story feel more grounded; as is, I find it a little too convenient that these places still exist in a way Edward would recognize and that he's able to visit them.
144rebecca-in-blueThis story is well-written, but the first two chapters have been very "past," only focusing on Edward's memories, with no mentions of the present Edward arriving to these places or looking around. I think that sort of framing device would help the story feel more grounded; as is, I find it a little too convenient that these places still exist in a way Edward would recognize and that he's able to visit them.
1/14/2020 c6 Readaholic187
Thanks for the story. It was different reading from the prospective of a foster child. Would love to read more about the time with Esme and Bella.
Thanks for the story. It was different reading from the prospective of a foster child. Would love to read more about the time with Esme and Bella.