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10m c5 hunm
So why does he want to train the twins in the dungeon? In other stories its because the MC gets their dick wet then grow attached and want them strong (as lame as that is). Here you just thrown the idea out there with absolutely no reasoning behind it
22h c10 I.wish.ff.authors.cmplt.strys
he still has the true longinus
1/17 c6 Wicked Erebus
Rereading this, I notice you said flop network instead of floo network during the contract writing scene.
1/15 c1 momogoyankees
first chapter done, looking good
1/11 c10 PasiveNox
Wonderful chapter:)
1/11 c9 PasiveNox
1/11 c8 PasiveNox
Nice chapter :)
1/11 c7 PasiveNox
Nice chapter
1/11 c6 PasiveNox
Wonderful chapter
1/11 c5 PasiveNox
Great chapter :)
1/11 c4 PasiveNox
Great chapter
1/1 c10 5Pokepercutopotter
Let out the biggest groan when I realized I finished this and there wasn't anoter chpater. RIP
12/31/2020 c1 Pokepercutopotter
Found you from your reddit posts funnily enough
12/30/2020 c10 1Joe Lawyer
This is a fun story, but a little light on character development, beyond the obvious game related development. What are his short to mid to long term goals? What is fun for him? What was he excited by in his past life? What worlds would he love to visit and interact with? Does he want to do things better in any world? Does he want to flip the game table and see how things shake out? Does he want to get laid? Build a harem? Form a relationship with some ultra powerful companion that accompanies him on his journey? This Harley thing, in the last chapter, has the potential for that, so I'm hoping that develops into something substantial. She was certainly fanatically devoted to the Joker so there is the potential for that level of slavish devotion to your MC, which would work for him given how little in the way of morals he has.

I'm hoping to read more soon! Happy New Year!
12/23/2020 c4 elixirmaster
Eww, i don't like him recieving a task from a random person, idk where from- in his head?, better for there to be a quest system ffs. I
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