for Tenhawks Alexander Harris and the Shadow Council9/30/2024 c11 Simianpower
Top 20 isn't all that respectable when the entire class is 40. That's about a C-tier average. Well, I guess with the Americans added that 40 becomes maybe 60 tops, but still, top third is mediocre at best.
Top 20 isn't all that respectable when the entire class is 40. That's about a C-tier average. Well, I guess with the Americans added that 40 becomes maybe 60 tops, but still, top third is mediocre at best.
9/30/2024 c7 Simianpower
Why would he even be considering coming back, given that him being there this year was an exception to the norm? He should be expecting to go to Salem from second year onward, unless he's been told otherwise somewhere off the page.
Why would he even be considering coming back, given that him being there this year was an exception to the norm? He should be expecting to go to Salem from second year onward, unless he's been told otherwise somewhere off the page.
9/30/2024 c5 Simianpower
Why the hell is Tonks suddenly a Slytherin? Canonically she's a Hufflepuff AND should've graduated before Harry got to Hogwarts. I get that this is fanfiction, but changing random stuff without any basis is just bad writing. If you want to change something, give a reason for it!
Why the hell is Tonks suddenly a Slytherin? Canonically she's a Hufflepuff AND should've graduated before Harry got to Hogwarts. I get that this is fanfiction, but changing random stuff without any basis is just bad writing. If you want to change something, give a reason for it!
9/30/2024 c1 Simianpower
Why do stories like this always force Xander Harris into the role of a magical prodigy but forget that Amy Madison even exists? She canonically WAS magically powerful, but in fanfiction she's almost always ignored.
Why do stories like this always force Xander Harris into the role of a magical prodigy but forget that Amy Madison even exists? She canonically WAS magically powerful, but in fanfiction she's almost always ignored.
9/23/2024 c68 AnthonyR89
i remember that little reveal back when this was originally posted. if anything, I have an even more negative reaction these days. the confederacy were a bunch of racist, traitor, slavers. Sherman didn't go far enough.
i remember that little reveal back when this was originally posted. if anything, I have an even more negative reaction these days. the confederacy were a bunch of racist, traitor, slavers. Sherman didn't go far enough.
9/22/2024 c10 AnthonyR89
so, don't think i really thought about it much when i initially read this years ago, but it has them mentioning that Grindewald wiped out a bunch of vampires. which, Buffy type vamps, fine. but the world of darkness type mentioned by Gomez? a single antidiluvian would crush the entire fucking wizarding world like a bug.
so, don't think i really thought about it much when i initially read this years ago, but it has them mentioning that Grindewald wiped out a bunch of vampires. which, Buffy type vamps, fine. but the world of darkness type mentioned by Gomez? a single antidiluvian would crush the entire fucking wizarding world like a bug.
9/21/2024 c2 AnthonyR89
meh. i always dealt with bullies with an unwillingness to back down and the determination to make anyone who tried to start a physical fight with me deeply regret it(i absolutely would fight dirty, and if there was more than one of them, thats when you grab a weapon and start putting them down HARD).
meh. i always dealt with bullies with an unwillingness to back down and the determination to make anyone who tried to start a physical fight with me deeply regret it(i absolutely would fight dirty, and if there was more than one of them, thats when you grab a weapon and start putting them down HARD).
12/29/2023 c130 Dragons6
This is good...can't wait for more...so Xander will have 4 wives when they fo the ritual right...who will Harry end up with...I'm hoping for Luna...please not Hermioneor Ginny..since these are the main ones people write about...I like her personality and thinking outside of the box...there is just something about her that I just love...she is just adorable...and she makes Harry smile...he needs thst in his life...and she will love living in the keep..Hermione can get with Ron or Victor...Ron she can control lole zmolly does Arthur and Victor I think bring her out more..like her softer feminine side coming out...
This is good...can't wait for more...so Xander will have 4 wives when they fo the ritual right...who will Harry end up with...I'm hoping for Luna...please not Hermioneor Ginny..since these are the main ones people write about...I like her personality and thinking outside of the box...there is just something about her that I just love...she is just adorable...and she makes Harry smile...he needs thst in his life...and she will love living in the keep..Hermione can get with Ron or Victor...Ron she can control lole zmolly does Arthur and Victor I think bring her out more..like her softer feminine side coming out...
11/17/2023 c120 
1beserkerbeast
I found more of the story
. ?sid35&textsize0&chapter122
If you want to add to this one.
never would have found these without the repost.
thanks
BB
1beserkerbeastI found more of the story
. ?sid35&textsize0&chapter122
If you want to add to this one.
never would have found these without the repost.
thanks
BB
10/17/2023 c26 Pickle3719
I thought Fester was the head of the family for America. In the movie wasn't he the older brother?
I thought Fester was the head of the family for America. In the movie wasn't he the older brother?
10/6/2023 c107 CMVreud
It just occured to me, but Harry is really not using his options well, ain't he?
Did he even talk wirh his mothers Coven Grimoire at all this year?
It just occured to me, but Harry is really not using his options well, ain't he?
Did he even talk wirh his mothers Coven Grimoire at all this year?
10/6/2023 c87 CMVreud
Aaaaaaw~
That was the perfect moment to exchange everyones Pumpkin juice with Coka Cola.
Or would that have been too much on the nose?
Aaaaaaw~
That was the perfect moment to exchange everyones Pumpkin juice with Coka Cola.
Or would that have been too much on the nose?
10/4/2023 c80 CMVreud
"Who needs to cast a spell through a guitar?"
I knew it! You'setting up Xander to be The Bard of the group .
"Who needs to cast a spell through a guitar?"
I knew it! You'setting up Xander to be The Bard of the group .