
2/8/2020 c23
5Ljd21690
Lovely job on this! You had me chuckling at some points and sighing at others, but certainly smiling throughout.

Lovely job on this! You had me chuckling at some points and sighing at others, but certainly smiling throughout.
2/8/2020 c23 Guest
I feel Elizabeth should bring the Jack photos back out :) Brownie points to Nathan for noticing, and helping Elizabeth feel ok about also having her memories :) Very sweet of him
I feel Elizabeth should bring the Jack photos back out :) Brownie points to Nathan for noticing, and helping Elizabeth feel ok about also having her memories :) Very sweet of him
2/7/2020 c22 Guest
Live it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Live it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
2/6/2020 c22 MsLaceyLoo
Finally! I'm so happy that they both took action! I can't wait to read future chapters.
Finally! I'm so happy that they both took action! I can't wait to read future chapters.
2/6/2020 c22 Guest
Absolutely amazing! More please! 3
Absolutely amazing! More please! 3
2/6/2020 c22
5Ljd21690
Yay! Finally! That's not how I expected it to go, but I loved it! I can totally see Nathan doing that.

Yay! Finally! That's not how I expected it to go, but I loved it! I can totally see Nathan doing that.
2/6/2020 c21 Guest
Wonderful chapter, great writing. Thank you for your gift of words. Waiting for the next chapter.
Wonderful chapter, great writing. Thank you for your gift of words. Waiting for the next chapter.
2/6/2020 c21 Ljd21690
What a great chapter! I loved the sweet bonding between Elizabeth and Allie, and yes, I definitely see the importance of this chapter if there is to be a Nathan/Elizabeth romance.
What a great chapter! I loved the sweet bonding between Elizabeth and Allie, and yes, I definitely see the importance of this chapter if there is to be a Nathan/Elizabeth romance.
2/6/2020 c21
21elizabethB88
What a beautiful chapter! Seeing Elizabeth care for Allie, reassuring her and comforting her...so sweet!

What a beautiful chapter! Seeing Elizabeth care for Allie, reassuring her and comforting her...so sweet!
2/5/2020 c20
4Susan Firth
Such a good imagining of their relationship - of course, I'm #TeamNathan all the way already, so this makes me very happy. Beautiful writing and excellent storytelling, surprising twists and turns, and great pacing throughout. I hope you keep writing, because WCTH will probably draw out the Elizabeth/Nathan/Lucas storyline for a while and we need our fix of Elizabeth/Nathan romance! I'm also as happy about the family they are creating together - so sweet. Thanks for writing!

Such a good imagining of their relationship - of course, I'm #TeamNathan all the way already, so this makes me very happy. Beautiful writing and excellent storytelling, surprising twists and turns, and great pacing throughout. I hope you keep writing, because WCTH will probably draw out the Elizabeth/Nathan/Lucas storyline for a while and we need our fix of Elizabeth/Nathan romance! I'm also as happy about the family they are creating together - so sweet. Thanks for writing!
2/5/2020 c20 Guest
Well done - Elizabeth choosing to keep Jack's promise is just so on point. It's like she's picking up the fight he used to fight, and I know this is fictional, but I'm proud of her :) You've written this scene really nicely, like I can feel in a small way the emotion that would have gone into those promises.
Well done - Elizabeth choosing to keep Jack's promise is just so on point. It's like she's picking up the fight he used to fight, and I know this is fictional, but I'm proud of her :) You've written this scene really nicely, like I can feel in a small way the emotion that would have gone into those promises.
2/4/2020 c19 Guest
AHHHHH! This is amazing, I love how you've connected Nathan and Jack together, so great :) Really enjoying this story. It makes it all the more meaningful having Nathan there in the show as a love interest (although I don't know if this would happen in the show, it's fun to imagine :))
AHHHHH! This is amazing, I love how you've connected Nathan and Jack together, so great :) Really enjoying this story. It makes it all the more meaningful having Nathan there in the show as a love interest (although I don't know if this would happen in the show, it's fun to imagine :))