for Carl the Jumper4/15 c87 Guest
So the perk of protecting his mind and soul are trash since auto jump chan can fuck with his head as before?
His perfect memory etc are trash too since he forgot 9/10 of his life?
I didn't bother to read the warcraft arc and i am hesitating if i should bother read this one.
So the perk of protecting his mind and soul are trash since auto jump chan can fuck with his head as before?
His perfect memory etc are trash too since he forgot 9/10 of his life?
I didn't bother to read the warcraft arc and i am hesitating if i should bother read this one.
4/15 c78 Guest
I don't understand, at lvl 1 with all his bloodline effect, his ki technique, his bhudda body... he was crap compared to a lvl 1 wolf but suddenly his abilities are overpowered niw at level 21.
It's not logical, either they are boosting him or not.
I don't understand, at lvl 1 with all his bloodline effect, his ki technique, his bhudda body... he was crap compared to a lvl 1 wolf but suddenly his abilities are overpowered niw at level 21.
It's not logical, either they are boosting him or not.
4/15 c77 Guest
Carl asked twice about who attacked the flight to the same person, why?
He could have looked at his stats to know how strong he was for a level 1, no?
Carl asked twice about who attacked the flight to the same person, why?
He could have looked at his stats to know how strong he was for a level 1, no?
4/8 c1 
1LuminouShadowAlt
You write as if you are writing a summary rather than a story. I just dont like this type of writing. "I saw this, I did this, they did that, then we went back home" maybe try living in the scene rather than doing this, describe the surrounding touch up on emotions your characters are feeling,etc
1LuminouShadowAltYou write as if you are writing a summary rather than a story. I just dont like this type of writing. "I saw this, I did this, they did that, then we went back home" maybe try living in the scene rather than doing this, describe the surrounding touch up on emotions your characters are feeling,etc
4/7 c39 1Dezzal
Honestly, your story is just getting very poorly executed. There is no more plot or fleshed out characters. It's just a summary of what's going on with huge info dumps of skills that I largely skip over because they bring no value to the story. You started strong, but it is just pointless to keep reading
1DezzalHonestly, your story is just getting very poorly executed. There is no more plot or fleshed out characters. It's just a summary of what's going on with huge info dumps of skills that I largely skip over because they bring no value to the story. You started strong, but it is just pointless to keep reading
3/25 c116 2SixFtWookie
I still enjoy this story and hope you haven't abandoned it. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens after this jump.
2SixFtWookieI still enjoy this story and hope you haven't abandoned it. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens after this jump.
3/21 c116 fantasticalscience
Is this going to keep updating? B/c ending it at the 15th jump after so much foreshadowing sucks and I have really been enjoying the story so far.
Is this going to keep updating? B/c ending it at the 15th jump after so much foreshadowing sucks and I have really been enjoying the story so far.
3/6 c116 Guest
Please come back!
Please come back!
2/24 c1 Guest
Please come back and continue with this story!
Please come back and continue with this story!
2/8 c1 112345678921
letting go of reading this, don't agree with your fic penname I believe there is no other "god" than the one mentioned within the Holy Bible the God who created the heavens and the earth and all that is upon between and the beneath, as the Father and had been inhabiting the Son and His very Living Spirit...
112345678921letting go of reading this, don't agree with your fic penname I believe there is no other "god" than the one mentioned within the Holy Bible the God who created the heavens and the earth and all that is upon between and the beneath, as the Father and had been inhabiting the Son and His very Living Spirit...
1/21 c116 robert108
The wuxia/xianxia jumps suck. Might just be me but I'm sick of them and their tropes.
The wuxia/xianxia jumps suck. Might just be me but I'm sick of them and their tropes.
12/23/2024 c91 tylor13roney
itachi was 4 when he was on the battlefield.
he was messed up come one bro the hate for itachi is kinda hard he was a kid who was raised to be. a loyal tool.
he had no chance.
shisui was his only friend and his mum when at home i guess
itachi was 4 when he was on the battlefield.
he was messed up come one bro the hate for itachi is kinda hard he was a kid who was raised to be. a loyal tool.
he had no chance.
shisui was his only friend and his mum when at home i guess
12/12/2024 c76 Efail
It feels like the story got a significant quality drop around here. Well, it was more likely around the cooking show mini arc but here's where it's really obvious. The main character repeats himself a bunch sometimes getting lost midway through a paragraph only to say the same thing but in a different way in the next. Despite having centuries worth of memories he is almost instantly lost in thought about his newest life so much so a group of random people walk right up to him. While he is still freaking out about his memories despite having been through more than 10 jumps they talk about maybe taming him, Does he immediately leave? No! he just sits there like an idiot for a while confused about the situation until he spits on the people he thinks are stronger than him then he chooses to fly away. It's like the author is trying to balance him becoming more powerful by having him become progressively dumber so he can't actually use any of that power.
It feels like the story got a significant quality drop around here. Well, it was more likely around the cooking show mini arc but here's where it's really obvious. The main character repeats himself a bunch sometimes getting lost midway through a paragraph only to say the same thing but in a different way in the next. Despite having centuries worth of memories he is almost instantly lost in thought about his newest life so much so a group of random people walk right up to him. While he is still freaking out about his memories despite having been through more than 10 jumps they talk about maybe taming him, Does he immediately leave? No! he just sits there like an idiot for a while confused about the situation until he spits on the people he thinks are stronger than him then he chooses to fly away. It's like the author is trying to balance him becoming more powerful by having him become progressively dumber so he can't actually use any of that power.