
5/2 c5 Guest
I love it! )
I love it! )
4/20 c32
2wolverinesfantasygirl
I'm gonna be as honest and blunt as possible, GET BACK HERE AND CONTINUE THIS STORY BEFORE I HAVE A MELT DOWN. Thank you for letting say that now I'm going to find a corner and cry because I'm laughing to damn hard.

I'm gonna be as honest and blunt as possible, GET BACK HERE AND CONTINUE THIS STORY BEFORE I HAVE A MELT DOWN. Thank you for letting say that now I'm going to find a corner and cry because I'm laughing to damn hard.
4/19 c32 Dragon Whistler
Good chapter. Get rid of Jane if she's jealous of little Evie. Evie had to deal with Lily's petty, jealous sister. There is no need for little Evie to deal with a petty, jealous wannabe stepmother.
Good chapter. Get rid of Jane if she's jealous of little Evie. Evie had to deal with Lily's petty, jealous sister. There is no need for little Evie to deal with a petty, jealous wannabe stepmother.
4/16 c32 Home World Security
A great chapter to a fantastic story. Hoping to read more sometime soon :)
A great chapter to a fantastic story. Hoping to read more sometime soon :)
4/15 c6
2kirosyamcha
150 million….. you smoking crack? I can understand 100k-500k maybe.. maybe by some act of god 1-2 million dollars. NYC is expensive after all. But you can buy a damn large house for 150 million even in NYC…

150 million….. you smoking crack? I can understand 100k-500k maybe.. maybe by some act of god 1-2 million dollars. NYC is expensive after all. But you can buy a damn large house for 150 million even in NYC…
4/13 c4 dark shadow man of nightmares
I got American Dragon Jake Long vibes from her saying the phrase Ah man.
I got American Dragon Jake Long vibes from her saying the phrase Ah man.
4/12 c32 Kaia
Length of the chapter doesn’t matter to me. It was worth the wait, and I agree with you that Natasha would be better off paired with Thor.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Length of the chapter doesn’t matter to me. It was worth the wait, and I agree with you that Natasha would be better off paired with Thor.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
4/9 c32 Entertainment lover
Excellent chapter. The conversation between Daniel,tony and jean was nice. It is wonderful that Tony offered the grangers to practice in stark industries. I loved how Loki is observing everything. Thor and Natasha will indeed make a wonderful couple. It is nice that Natasha also loved Evie. Jane needs to realise that she does not belong here.
Excellent chapter. The conversation between Daniel,tony and jean was nice. It is wonderful that Tony offered the grangers to practice in stark industries. I loved how Loki is observing everything. Thor and Natasha will indeed make a wonderful couple. It is nice that Natasha also loved Evie. Jane needs to realise that she does not belong here.
4/7 c32 Guest
Awesome fanfic Evelyn is so cute and sweet when she goes to hogwarts she should be in hufflepuff and hermione should be in raven claw or in hufflepuff with evie and only Minerva Severus flitwick sprout and pomfrey should know evie is asgards princess so they can help her if needed Thor and Loki will be the ones to reveal that fact to the hogwarts staff and to keep it a secret from dumbledore
Awesome fanfic Evelyn is so cute and sweet when she goes to hogwarts she should be in hufflepuff and hermione should be in raven claw or in hufflepuff with evie and only Minerva Severus flitwick sprout and pomfrey should know evie is asgards princess so they can help her if needed Thor and Loki will be the ones to reveal that fact to the hogwarts staff and to keep it a secret from dumbledore