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2SeriouslySirius4ever
I'm really enjoying your story, Evie is so cute! I hope Padfoot and Moony get to be a part of Evie's life.
One comment on your writing, you often switch between past tense and present tense in your story. It's probably better to pick one and stick with it. What I mean is, sometimes you use past tense, [he said this, she thought that]. At other times you use present tense, [he says this, she thinks that].
Otherwise I think your story is really good and interesting to read.
2SeriouslySirius4everI'm really enjoying your story, Evie is so cute! I hope Padfoot and Moony get to be a part of Evie's life.
One comment on your writing, you often switch between past tense and present tense in your story. It's probably better to pick one and stick with it. What I mean is, sometimes you use past tense, [he said this, she thought that]. At other times you use present tense, [he says this, she thinks that].
Otherwise I think your story is really good and interesting to read.
1/5 c20 Guest
Update this you must.
Update this you will.
Update this you must.
Update this you will.
1/5 c20 foxymama31.1987
I absolutely this story it's an awesome plot and you making tony little Evie's relative? awesome as well and I can not wait for the next update at your convenience of course!
I absolutely this story it's an awesome plot and you making tony little Evie's relative? awesome as well and I can not wait for the next update at your convenience of course!
12/30/2020 c20 Swordking
Thanks for the great chapter
Thanks for the great chapter
12/30/2020 c20 Ana Luisa
Hermoso bello muy bien me facino excelente
Hermoso bello muy bien me facino excelente
12/30/2020 c20 Mar91
I like the chapter
I like the chapter
12/30/2020 c20 James Birdsong
Delightful
Delightful
12/30/2020 c20 3nofilter
Well. This will certainly be interesting. Can't wait to see THAT confrontation happen. Curious how attached Sirius and Remus will feel when they find out Evie isn't James' kid...
3nofilterWell. This will certainly be interesting. Can't wait to see THAT confrontation happen. Curious how attached Sirius and Remus will feel when they find out Evie isn't James' kid...
12/30/2020 c20 5Triforce Dragons
Great chapter! This was awesome! Can't wait for the talk they will have.
5Triforce DragonsGreat chapter! This was awesome! Can't wait for the talk they will have.
12/30/2020 c20 ThunderClaw03
Sirius and Remus are in for a shocking revelation about Evie's true parents. Imagine Evie giving them a shocking hand shake. Update when you can
Sirius and Remus are in for a shocking revelation about Evie's true parents. Imagine Evie giving them a shocking hand shake. Update when you can
12/30/2020 c20 1Astrid of Dragons
Great chapter! Excited for the confrontation with Remus and Sirius.
1Astrid of DragonsGreat chapter! Excited for the confrontation with Remus and Sirius.