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7Cali Michaelis
Evie could have been suffering from Mental Regression, something that does happen with SOME abused people. However I'm not an expert and I have no study for Phycology. So this doesn't really strike me as odd.
Grammer and setup for the structure of the story is a bit odd(off or needs a bit of proof reading). Still a good chapter though
7Cali MichaelisEvie could have been suffering from Mental Regression, something that does happen with SOME abused people. However I'm not an expert and I have no study for Phycology. So this doesn't really strike me as odd.
Grammer and setup for the structure of the story is a bit odd(off or needs a bit of proof reading). Still a good chapter though
1/5 c15 7hannah.kaho
I would have thought Tony would write a check, that way he doesn't have to pay that stupid service fee. That and the option of donating money or things to the school, like some private schools doae
7hannah.kahoI would have thought Tony would write a check, that way he doesn't have to pay that stupid service fee. That and the option of donating money or things to the school, like some private schools doae
1/2 c14 Trife
She acts 5 until the boy is mentioned and then she starts acting like a 16 year old girl finding out her crush is going to be at the party “OMG he’s going to be there?! I have to have my hair done and the best outfit and makeup”. That’s not how any 10 year old acts lol. That’s barely even out of the phase of boys are blah.
She acts 5 until the boy is mentioned and then she starts acting like a 16 year old girl finding out her crush is going to be at the party “OMG he’s going to be there?! I have to have my hair done and the best outfit and makeup”. That’s not how any 10 year old acts lol. That’s barely even out of the phase of boys are blah.
12/25/2021 c1 Guest
Can you update unexpected love next please I don’t care if you have to do a time skip to the end of the pregnancy but I just want to see it get some more love
Can you update unexpected love next please I don’t care if you have to do a time skip to the end of the pregnancy but I just want to see it get some more love
12/25/2021 c23 Chikapuffin
This story is great! I’m looking forward to new chapters
This story is great! I’m looking forward to new chapters
12/25/2021 c23 NicoleR85
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Merry Christmas!
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Merry Christmas!
12/25/2021 c6 5Tsukikageshi
Looks at ten year old…. Ten year old announces and describes bowel movement in vivid detail and tries to stay awake to be tucked in when his dad works late….
Ten is an odd age where still a child but also puberty is already starting in many ways. Somewhere between ‘tuck me in mommy’ and ‘rules are stupid. We should overthrow the government to get rid of school’. Children are funny like that.
5TsukikageshiLooks at ten year old…. Ten year old announces and describes bowel movement in vivid detail and tries to stay awake to be tucked in when his dad works late….
Ten is an odd age where still a child but also puberty is already starting in many ways. Somewhere between ‘tuck me in mommy’ and ‘rules are stupid. We should overthrow the government to get rid of school’. Children are funny like that.
12/25/2021 c22 nightwing27
spiderman was awsome wow what movie 3 spidermans, green goblin, doctor oct, sandman, lizard, electro each villian in order of past movies. I worder what will happen to thor after love and thunder crhis says he will love to do more thor even though the movie will have pass the torch
spiderman was awsome wow what movie 3 spidermans, green goblin, doctor oct, sandman, lizard, electro each villian in order of past movies. I worder what will happen to thor after love and thunder crhis says he will love to do more thor even though the movie will have pass the torch
12/24/2021 c23 lonewolf420
Still don't like the ending to the last chapter, but at least he ended up in the mental ward instead of the morge.
Still don't like the ending to the last chapter, but at least he ended up in the mental ward instead of the morge.