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9/21/2023 c22 Entertainment lover
Fantastic chapter. The conversation between Sirius,Remus,Loki,Thor,tony,Evie and pepper was nice. Sirius should not have said that to Evie.
8/31/2023 c28 I love creative fanfiction
please update
8/28/2023 c13 1WhitePhoenix22
There is literally a boy named Bjorn in my class
8/28/2023 c6 WhitePhoenix22
I love Evie
8/28/2023 c2 WhitePhoenix22
As a Norwegian, I must say, the transitions are awesome!
4/27/2023 c28 Guest
Working my way through your fan fiction stories hope you update hope you're okay Vivid and all .So more please and Thank You
2/7/2023 c9 Eldersprig
missed opportunity - 3 intelligence people in the room Loki, and all would have pointed out the obvious fact: no body, so Dark Lord is till alive.
1/28/2023 c22 Guest
Lupin should really explain that serious was mentally tortured by magical monsters that sucked the happiness out of its victims while he was being starved for 10 years in prison

the only way he stayed sane was the image of his goddaughter, his animagus transformation and his rage

I’d be surprised if he wasn’t a lil unhinged after that

I’m kinda surprised Bellatrix was still an effective fighter after all those years

Occlumency is such a cheat lol

Wizards that know how to do it can just side step mental trauma if they’re skilled enough
1/28/2023 c15 Guest
It would be great if tony used rune work on his armor

Make it more durable and add modified cushioning charms to activate on command so it’ll act like vibranium and absorb kinetic energy so tony could fall like Warmachine and be perfectly fine

Ignore air resistance for more speed

Partially enchant it with flying broom enchantments for more freedom in 3D movement

maybe expanded spaces too for extra ark reactors, ammo and rockets and more weapons

His mini rockets are gonna pack more explosives lol

He’s gonna be like inspector gadget with all the extra space

Maybe tony could fiddle with the space expanding runes and make a space bomb rockets and implode people in its blast radius

That’ll be awesome
1/28/2023 c10 Guest
Huh I was sure she was gonna steal Ventus

Oh well
12/30/2022 c28 2acetwolf94
12/22/2022 c28 1dreaddragonknight
You mixed up Evie with Hermione near the end there, cause I didn't see what Evie would have to make up her mind for.

Otherwise good chapter, nice seeing Peter between the time of Iron Man 2 and Civil War
12/22/2022 c27 dreaddragonknight
this was an adorable thing. I am interested to see why the Grangers moved to the US
12/22/2022 c25 dreaddragonknight
While cool, i wish the Natasha as a mother figure was given a little more time to be explored before now, cause it feels rather out of nowhere. Also i just put together the number of ways Evie could resemble Natasha's sister Yelena
12/22/2022 c24 dreaddragonknight
Huh, so Remus knows what a horcrux is? While he is one of the only competent DADA teachers Harry ever had but it is implied that those are a very esoteric form of magic, maybe you could put in an aside of how he knows about it here?
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