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11/6/2022 c28 NicoleR85
Another great chapter.
11/6/2022 c28 23kyekye
Can I say how happy I am to see this getting updated? Not gonna lie; I had almost forgotten about it. So when I saw it in my email, I had to go back and reread the whole thing. It did not disappoint; it was just as enjoyable to read again. I can't wait to read more.
11/5/2022 c27 Armiture
I wonder how Hermione ended up in New York, did Dumbledore meddle or is it simply a plot butterfly?

If Peter Parker is there, I wonder if his buddy Osborn is there too but had already been attending the prior year.
11/4/2022 c25 Armiture
IIRC JARVIS was destroyed by Ultron in the second Avengers movie so it's good to know a back-up survives or he gets away from Ultron. Thanks to the Heinlein book, I keep picturing Friday as female but I have no idea if Friday in the MCU is male or female.

That said, I'm glad she made some interesting friends on her first day.

I could barely speak any English when I stared Kindergarten so she's way ahead of the curve for fifth grade. I'm glad that her private school acknowledges the fact that Hispanics are rapidly becoming the largest ethnic group in the USA. I had a good laugh the summer of 2021 when a number of idiotic parents protested teaching the Latin alphabet and Arabic numbers.
11/4/2022 c24 Armiture
It's good that things are working out with Remus and for Remus, if he knows Spanish, he can become the Spanish tutor.
11/4/2022 c23 Armiture
At least he isn't suicidal and I'm glad he agreed to being treated in New York.
11/4/2022 c22 Armiture
I was expecting the mistake to be an ambush but what Sirius did was much worse and had very serious consequences.

It'll be interesting to see how Dumbledore reacts when Sirius tells him what happened when he found her.
11/4/2022 c21 Armiture
Good to see that Tony and Evie stayed long enough to be fully treated.

The next episode should be a lot of fun to read.
11/4/2022 c20 Armiture
It's a shame that the one thing Sirius believed from Dumbledore's meddling is that Evie was kidnapped against her will.
11/4/2022 c18 Armiture
Well, it's good that it was taken care of so quickly for Evie.

Dealing with Tony's PTSD is important, you don't want a walking, flying tank to have an episode.
11/4/2022 c17 Armiture
Let the Scooby Doo chase begin!
11/4/2022 c16 Armiture
And the meddling begins.

At least he was able to quickly get Sirius out of Azkaban, tried and freed after being found innocent. Since he was never convicted, he can't be pardoned, which requires an admission of guilt.

Fun Fact: if you're a scumbag who was given a Presential Pardon, that drops all federal charges against you and leaves you vulnerable to state level charges without being able to plead the fifth because you already admitted guilt by accepting the pardon. Therefore, you can't incriminate yourself.
11/4/2022 c15 Armiture
I just realized back when Evie was healed by an Asgardian healer, you neglected to mention the effects of it on her. Did she fill out more so she no longer looked like skin and bones, did she grow taller, etc.?
11/4/2022 c14 Armiture
I think Lily and Tony being second cousins would make Tony a second cousin once removed to Evie, not entirely sure how that works but it's either that or third cousins.

I assume Tony came up with the dilution of magic theory himself since in canon Harry, Albus, and Tom were "half-bloods" and were the most powerful wizards in the world.
11/4/2022 c13 Armiture
Well, at least her familiar isn't an Alaspin minidrag.
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