2/24 c22 Alura
I'm assuming it was the Hero of Being a Sanctimonious C*nt (or Bow Hero for short) that shot off Syrup's head. Total bummer that the story was (presumably) abandoned at a cliff hanger, would have been nice to at the very least seen the conclusion of the First Wave. To my knowledge there aren't too many Bofuri fanfics, let alone ones that are any good. Sad that one of the better ones I've seen got dropped so early in the story.

2/11 c22 mangouschase
? when did the first wave happen, wdym this is eve of the second wave, also when did Maple do the Dragon Hourglass thing?

1/24 c6 beetlelium
all hail the round 1 also is there an error 303*2 is not 510 if the stats are pre buffs she should have 757.5 vitality in reality

11/23/2024 c22 12dialNforNinja
Awww, of all the places to leave off... I know all too well what a pain it is to write mass combat, but "they rode off to fight the demon army and were never heard from again" does not even imply a happy ending, you know?

11/16/2024 c6 gazingvoid
...Do you Honestly believe it would go that way!? not only is she a girl in a matriarchal kingdom. She's freakin adorable.

malty is a selfish idiot. but i doubt even she'd be stupid enough to accuse maple of sexual assault.

Nah. She'd just send assasins or whatever. or she'd have her captured. maple doesn't even have any actual attack power. could have tricked her so easily it's not even funny.

"hey, can I see your shield.?"

"sure here you go!"

plus. the people know that Malty isn't the heiress.

and motoyasu definitely wouldn't have given a shit. he'd be creaming his pants thinking about it. and he'd try to defend both in some weird Olympics level mental gymnastics.

he fundamentally cannot except that a cute girl can do wrong. he was literally stabbed to death by two girls. and he doesn't blame them for it.

the premise was good. but you ruined it so fast it's insane.

11/16/2024 c2 gazingvoid
lmfao! oh my god my sides!? luckily this world doesn't have a maple patch.

I'm sad. because this is hilarious. and I'm only on the second chapter. and it's not completed.

so many good stories that are incomplete on this site. oh well. i guess I'll enjoy it while it lasts.

i also really liked the incomplete batman and super shield hero stories as well.

i just love how she just decided to let her shield eat everything as well. "berry bush shield."

i don't think even naofumi was that obsessive. and he made sure to separate everything into different components to get as many shields as possible.

but it might have just skipped over a ton of filler shields.

so far this is what i expect from maple. though, i know it's probably a light hearted fic. comedy and stuff.

is she like a gourmet or something? obsessed about new tastes. i don't think raw rabbits and stuff taste that good.

it's not actually a videogame so like...she actually ate a dead rabbit. blood, entrails and everything. is maple actually even human in this story!?

i mean. it's awesome if she isn't. adds more depth to the story. maybe the shirld actually made her into a human filolial hybrid to help compensate her insatiable hunger.

that's how filolias came into existence. they were created. so. a legendary weapon definitely has that power.

i guess we'll know if she grows wings and has an instinctual hate of all dragons. she already has the childish part down lol.

great. now even if that isn't where this story is heading. i kind of want to try writing it myself.

"maple, the filolial hero."

10/25/2024 c22 Rakkis157
I enjoyed this fic and hope you decide to give it another go one day, but holy hell was this cliffhanger foul.