for Let's Fall in Love7/20/2020 c5 Guest
Valentino is the WORST
Valentino is the WORST
7/20/2020 c5 xXNightcorequeNX
I feel as if I have been waiting for an updated chapter for forever! I was so excited when I saw the update that I screamed!. I've been keeping up with "The Girl in Black" so I can understand why you haven't been able to devote a lot of time to this fanfic but it's still a wonderful story, and your doing awsome. Keep up the Good work!
I feel as if I have been waiting for an updated chapter for forever! I was so excited when I saw the update that I screamed!. I've been keeping up with "The Girl in Black" so I can understand why you haven't been able to devote a lot of time to this fanfic but it's still a wonderful story, and your doing awsome. Keep up the Good work!
7/20/2020 c5 YanaW
Good point about the demonic OCs haven’t seen cases related to that but overall I agree to what you’re saying. I liked how you wrote about Alastor’s weakness it feels real enough that it could be in the show also it was interesting to know Tina’s backstory was really waitin on that on what she did. Wonder what more is to come from her. I hope that they make an episode or amv over Vox to read your perception of him if that be the case. Can’t wait for the next chapter
Good point about the demonic OCs haven’t seen cases related to that but overall I agree to what you’re saying. I liked how you wrote about Alastor’s weakness it feels real enough that it could be in the show also it was interesting to know Tina’s backstory was really waitin on that on what she did. Wonder what more is to come from her. I hope that they make an episode or amv over Vox to read your perception of him if that be the case. Can’t wait for the next chapter
7/20/2020 c5 
1Dragon Bone Z
There was a book written by a former pimp. He said that you must understand your women but never let them understand you. Manipulation,trickery and threats are key to control.
1Dragon Bone ZThere was a book written by a former pimp. He said that you must understand your women but never let them understand you. Manipulation,trickery and threats are key to control.
7/20/2020 c5 6Kuchia-chi
Everything about this chapter was just fantastic. I love Valentino of a character and I'm so glad to see him appear, even if it's to cause trouble. The budding relationship between the Tina and Alastor is so nice. Seeing Tina's emotions all over the place and her thought process and how it conflicts with Al's ever now and again only because they communicate differently is so brilliant a read.
And I completely agree with you on the sinners' statement and seeing Tina express her sins despite regretting them really makes her feel like she was alive and lived in Hell.
Absolutely beautiful chapter! Thank you so much for the hard work. I'm looking forward to reading Girl in Black too.
6Kuchia-chiEverything about this chapter was just fantastic. I love Valentino of a character and I'm so glad to see him appear, even if it's to cause trouble. The budding relationship between the Tina and Alastor is so nice. Seeing Tina's emotions all over the place and her thought process and how it conflicts with Al's ever now and again only because they communicate differently is so brilliant a read.
And I completely agree with you on the sinners' statement and seeing Tina express her sins despite regretting them really makes her feel like she was alive and lived in Hell.
Absolutely beautiful chapter! Thank you so much for the hard work. I'm looking forward to reading Girl in Black too.
6/21/2020 c1 6Kuchia-chi
I think I'm in love. You absolutely nailed Alastor. He seems like such a hard character to write. That was amazing to read. I adore Tina and I'm really looking forward to see how this goes
6Kuchia-chiI think I'm in love. You absolutely nailed Alastor. He seems like such a hard character to write. That was amazing to read. I adore Tina and I'm really looking forward to see how this goes