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2/24/2021 c7 dakiesalamander
Another pics are bad because author cannot do them right and are only distruptive... Really the quality after chapter 4 dropped like a stone nearing black hole...
2/24/2021 c6 dakiesalamander
It got potential but. Chapter 5 killed it in the bad sense. It's super cretenish and super boring
1/18/2021 c1 Eragon135790
the mc could be me except for his fixation on fanarticles of anime/manga...
1/10/2021 c2 Zentari2238
A master assassin, that could pass for a 13-year old...
1/8/2021 c13 Dragon0905
Odd. I find the dialog to be far easier than all the actions. Keeping track of each person's movements. Thier personal inventory of weapons, armor, items, and magics. Not to mention the amount of times each thing can be used or the durability or the items and themselves.
Like knowing that a person was facing X and turned left to move 30 feet to stab Y. Then turned 180 degrees and moved 74 feet to hit Z. Now I have to describe what direction to turn to go back to X who is now back in the fight. While remembering where each fighter from both sides are moving and remembering thier personal combat styles. As no fighter is likely to stand in the same place unless its forced. And nothing stays the same distance from a moving person.
1/5/2021 c2 NataS666
Wow! Brilliant character creation! I know this will be epic!
1/4/2021 c10 Jack1nTheBox
... I hate you.

I mean, I don't actually, but ugh. This is what I was worried about when he went from level 10 to almost 500 between two chapters. Oh well, we'll see if things stay interesting or not.
1/4/2021 c8 Jack1nTheBox
your pacing is a bit random and characters have quicker mood swings than pregnant women but other than that I'm enjoying this a lot.
1/4/2021 c2 Jack1nTheBox
imma cry man, why's everyone shitting on illusionages. my favorite class gets no love.
12/23/2020 c13 TheHawk2210
can't wait to read about the game itself getting fucked in the ass lol
12/20/2020 c13 9sd74
... In my opinion, at least its better than what I'm feeling in s/13755519 or s/9268774
12/20/2020 c11 sd74
Damn, I thought you were gonna summon Kirby.
12/18/2020 c3 Han Is DEAD
bruv, there is so many 'I' a in pronoun that I've got to read at least twice to understand you. That's for me the most important thing first person writer has to be careful as that can make or break a story.
12/18/2020 c2 Han Is DEAD
surprisingly entertaining info dump
12/16/2020 c11 vongolaseiza012
I told you. I tell her. So I speak with arrogant tone... Mwahahah
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