for Luke and Leia's Excellent Adventure5/14 c41 RomanQrr
I'm amazed that there are at least 41 chapters rehashing basically the same plot from the various angles.
But I am even more amazed that despite repetition it is still an interesting read.
I'm amazed that there are at least 41 chapters rehashing basically the same plot from the various angles.
But I am even more amazed that despite repetition it is still an interesting read.
5/11 c100 Debra N
Another wonderful arc. I loved the bit about Vader's saber shift in color from red to green.
Another wonderful arc. I loved the bit about Vader's saber shift in color from red to green.
5/3 c27 Guest
Side notes killing Jar Jar is love, side notes killing Jar Jar is life
(Except if hesa bekommen more bombard than yousa could ever imagine. That would be bad.)
Side notes killing Jar Jar is love, side notes killing Jar Jar is life
(Except if hesa bekommen more bombard than yousa could ever imagine. That would be bad.)
5/5 c103 Silverien
Okay i am LOVING this timeline! i hadn't thought of going so far back! So cute seeing baby Anakin! I hope we get to see how things pan out for him and Padme!
Okay i am LOVING this timeline! i hadn't thought of going so far back! So cute seeing baby Anakin! I hope we get to see how things pan out for him and Padme!
4/29 c102 Tenchi
Kenobi you are talking like anakin and hope you not become like him in future for it not be good for you. Just wise words that must be said.
Kenobi you are talking like anakin and hope you not become like him in future for it not be good for you. Just wise words that must be said.
4/30 c103 
1Nai Darkor
Now we only have to remove the guy Palpy feared so much he had to do do a murder on him in his sleep.
1Nai DarkorNow we only have to remove the guy Palpy feared so much he had to do do a murder on him in his sleep.
4/29 c103 2EmlynMara
Too bad Sidious.
Boy is Kenobi clueless, selfish, and unpleasant
Although time traveling Luke can be a bit much.
2EmlynMaraToo bad Sidious.
Boy is Kenobi clueless, selfish, and unpleasant
Although time traveling Luke can be a bit much.
4/29 c103 Rake1810
One of my favorite consistent things in these stories is when whoever travels from the future calmly talks a whole lot of murder and the prequel people get all offended. Then the murder happens anway
One of my favorite consistent things in these stories is when whoever travels from the future calmly talks a whole lot of murder and the prequel people get all offended. Then the murder happens anway
3/26 c100 Super Squashman
Great chapter
Got a request in a future story arc could you please use some rebel characters in the rebel tv show timeline
Looking forward to more chapters soon when they are ready
Great chapter
Got a request in a future story arc could you please use some rebel characters in the rebel tv show timeline
Looking forward to more chapters soon when they are ready
3/22 c1 Knackles
"I intend this one to be short, like 3 or 4 chapters"
looks down
100 chapters
Nah, but this is really good so far. Good job.
"I intend this one to be short, like 3 or 4 chapters"
looks down
100 chapters
Nah, but this is really good so far. Good job.
3/22 c102 Guest
I loved Yoda's reaction to Luke projecting himself to the Jedi Temple and his reaction to him being from a different timeline and the future! I also loved a five year old Padme and baby Ani meeting at Varykino! Her parents reaction to the travelers was interesting. I loved it! Great writing! I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you and Happy Spring!
I loved Yoda's reaction to Luke projecting himself to the Jedi Temple and his reaction to him being from a different timeline and the future! I also loved a five year old Padme and baby Ani meeting at Varykino! Her parents reaction to the travelers was interesting. I loved it! Great writing! I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you and Happy Spring!