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5/24/2023 c5 DracoKing30
Really like this story can't wait for new chapters
10/2/2022 c1 Dasgun
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6/28/2022 c6 DracoKing30
Really love this story can't wait for new chapters
7/19/2020 c1 7Paxloria
Off to a good start.

Critique:
~ In the bit where Kiritsugu is looking at the Watch, you left the last paragraphs sentence incomplete.
~ Since no one is shouting, or surprised, or shocked, you shouldn't keep writing that they "Exclaimed" all the time. Instead, have them say, or ask, or said, or question, or inquire, or reply.
7/19/2020 c6 OmegaDragon30
I really enjoy reading this, keep up the good work.
3/28/2020 c5 yann0406
More please
3/27/2020 c5 177Firehedgehog
niice
3/27/2020 c1 Vasukiev
Is it really that difficult to think of a summary? Even a simple splurge about the plot or a key idea would be better than “no summary yet.” Just put a filler in and you can change it later, don’t just leave it blank.
3/27/2020 c5 ivanruzic3758
Really? Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha and Sailor Moon?
3/23/2020 c4 Firehedgehog
amusing
2/28/2020 c4 181Quatermass
Fun fact: Kukulkan is another name for Quetzlcoatl. Who is also a Servant. And one of the most fun Servants...
2/28/2020 c4 LMaltez
This is a disappointing chapter. Nothing truly occur and the fight in the next seems to be put just to show their progress when there should be plenty of ways of doing that. Actually, reading about their adventures that occur during the time skipped seems to be much more interesting than a random fight out of the blue.
2/22/2020 c3 Qube
Really hope we get to see Sakura's and Shirou’s powers and servants.
2/22/2020 c3 Redrangerlegacy
This is awesome and hilarious! I hope to see how they’ll deal with Gilgamesh.
2/21/2020 c3 guest
e-rank luck strikes again. poor cg emiya, walking in on his female counter part sleeping naked with her sakura.
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