
5/12/2020 c3 WrathofAjax
i like this story a lot so far. it will be interesting to see how a force using Stark family (as opposed to just one of them) fares in Westeros now.
i like this story a lot so far. it will be interesting to see how a force using Stark family (as opposed to just one of them) fares in Westeros now.
5/12/2020 c5 Guest
well
well
5/12/2020 c5
4Darth Ralan
that knocking part was priceless! the cliffhanger sucks but it still gave me a satisfaction reading this. can't wait to see the next chapter. bdw, will nox be paired with anyone?

that knocking part was priceless! the cliffhanger sucks but it still gave me a satisfaction reading this. can't wait to see the next chapter. bdw, will nox be paired with anyone?
5/12/2020 c5
2te.nellis
Lol melting down the sword is a good idea. That way he can give Jon his own customized sword. Loved the chapter! Keep it up!

Lol melting down the sword is a good idea. That way he can give Jon his own customized sword. Loved the chapter! Keep it up!
5/12/2020 c5 Mark1
One hell of a fight scene! Good Job! Please update again soon.
One hell of a fight scene! Good Job! Please update again soon.
5/12/2020 c5
2Genesis
I have enjoyed reading this chapter, do continue with your tale. I am enjoying it immensely.

I have enjoyed reading this chapter, do continue with your tale. I am enjoying it immensely.
5/12/2020 c1 Mister LaGuardia
Love this chapter; take however long you need, I'm looking forward.I'm not certain how I feel about a wisecracking Sith; it may work to throw opponents off, but it may degradation his mystique which is useful. Right now Nox needs to avoid becoming the subject of a missing contest between lords and maintain relative neutrality; one of the best ways is to accept different force sensitive from all areas and assure that their loyalty is first to him before making them indispensable to the lords. In order to avoid traps of marriage or land he should probably claim he can only. marry a force sensetive, and conquer his own territoryEssos, the Iron Islands, the Stepenstones, North of the Wall, etc.). I feel that regarding the Faith he can probably claim belief in at least the father as there's a parallel in Star Wars and the theme would be appropriate given his crusade against rape.
Love this chapter; take however long you need, I'm looking forward.I'm not certain how I feel about a wisecracking Sith; it may work to throw opponents off, but it may degradation his mystique which is useful. Right now Nox needs to avoid becoming the subject of a missing contest between lords and maintain relative neutrality; one of the best ways is to accept different force sensitive from all areas and assure that their loyalty is first to him before making them indispensable to the lords. In order to avoid traps of marriage or land he should probably claim he can only. marry a force sensetive, and conquer his own territoryEssos, the Iron Islands, the Stepenstones, North of the Wall, etc.). I feel that regarding the Faith he can probably claim belief in at least the father as there's a parallel in Star Wars and the theme would be appropriate given his crusade against rape.
5/12/2020 c5 DullReign82
Nox Is a total Badass! If this is the kind of chapters I can look forward to then I say take your time I can wait.
Nox Is a total Badass! If this is the kind of chapters I can look forward to then I say take your time I can wait.
5/12/2020 c5 goddragonking
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more: