for Song of A Northern Sorcerer4/9/2020 c4 majored
well i must say i like this story very much. i cant wait for you to update it. i have no criticism for you, but the whole lightsaber battery thing was to my understanding that until the blade is touching something no energy is expended, but when it does touch something or burn through a door, deflect a bolt etc, then it uses energy. although that energy might last for a long long time.
well i must say i like this story very much. i cant wait for you to update it. i have no criticism for you, but the whole lightsaber battery thing was to my understanding that until the blade is touching something no energy is expended, but when it does touch something or burn through a door, deflect a bolt etc, then it uses energy. although that energy might last for a long long time.
4/7/2020 c4 DullReign82
I can't believe I almost missed out on this story, I don't know why they haven't had you on my list of authors to follow sooner.
I can't believe I almost missed out on this story, I don't know why they haven't had you on my list of authors to follow sooner.
4/7/2020 c4 shadow patronus
That, was fantastic! I like Nox and his induction in the North and I enjoy the dramatic parts..
Thanks for a good read in this forced quarantine.
Excellent length of the chapters.
Good luck!
That, was fantastic! I like Nox and his induction in the North and I enjoy the dramatic parts..
Thanks for a good read in this forced quarantine.
Excellent length of the chapters.
Good luck!
4/6/2020 c4 E
Pretty good chapter.
Pretty good chapter.
4/5/2020 c4 The Gandhara
This story is very interesting, and you're doing a good job so far in keeping Nox from curbstomping the setting by forcing him to rely mostly on politics and diplomacy rather than his Force powers. Thoros, or maybe even all the followers of Rh'llor, having some power of their own also suggests that, hopefully, the world of ASOIAF won't be a simple cakewalk for Nox.
I look forward to read about the fallout after the events of the war. The knowledge of the Starks having a real sorcerer in their service will surely affect the plans of several other key players. Even more when it spreads that the Stark children themselves are learning such powerful 'magic'. Will other Houses throw their children at them, hoping to gain such power for their lineages? Or will they be denounced as a danger and rejected? It's gonna be a mess, that's for sure, and I intend to enjoy it.
Equally interesting is gonna be the Martell's reaction. Will Amory's death lead to a change in dynamics between both Houses? Will they try and poach Nox from the Starks? I hope you don't skip on that part.
A little nitpick. Ned told Robb in the War Room that Ser Rodrick Cassel would stay in Winterfell to help him with his duties as acting Lord of the North, but when Ned arrives on Pyke, Ser Rodrick has accompanied him to war.
If it doesn't interfere with the story you want to tell, I propose that rather than differences in power level for the Stark children, they instead had different areas of force powers in which they stood out.
This story is very interesting, and you're doing a good job so far in keeping Nox from curbstomping the setting by forcing him to rely mostly on politics and diplomacy rather than his Force powers. Thoros, or maybe even all the followers of Rh'llor, having some power of their own also suggests that, hopefully, the world of ASOIAF won't be a simple cakewalk for Nox.
I look forward to read about the fallout after the events of the war. The knowledge of the Starks having a real sorcerer in their service will surely affect the plans of several other key players. Even more when it spreads that the Stark children themselves are learning such powerful 'magic'. Will other Houses throw their children at them, hoping to gain such power for their lineages? Or will they be denounced as a danger and rejected? It's gonna be a mess, that's for sure, and I intend to enjoy it.
Equally interesting is gonna be the Martell's reaction. Will Amory's death lead to a change in dynamics between both Houses? Will they try and poach Nox from the Starks? I hope you don't skip on that part.
A little nitpick. Ned told Robb in the War Room that Ser Rodrick Cassel would stay in Winterfell to help him with his duties as acting Lord of the North, but when Ned arrives on Pyke, Ser Rodrick has accompanied him to war.
If it doesn't interfere with the story you want to tell, I propose that rather than differences in power level for the Stark children, they instead had different areas of force powers in which they stood out.
4/4/2020 c4 MattKennedy
Fun times with the War against the Iron Islands. :) Also, yay for Lorch dying.
Fun times with the War against the Iron Islands. :) Also, yay for Lorch dying.
4/4/2020 c4 
1Papa Smaug
Really bang up job. One of my fears with stories like these is that the main character is portrayed as ridiculously overpowered but you've managed to get around that detail quite nicely and made it feel believable. I'm usually wary of introducing abstract concepts like the Force into another fandom but you've pulled it off nicely and tied everything up in a neat bow.
Great writing, not lacking in detail but not crowding the reader either.
Definitely looking forward to more.
1Papa SmaugReally bang up job. One of my fears with stories like these is that the main character is portrayed as ridiculously overpowered but you've managed to get around that detail quite nicely and made it feel believable. I'm usually wary of introducing abstract concepts like the Force into another fandom but you've pulled it off nicely and tied everything up in a neat bow.
Great writing, not lacking in detail but not crowding the reader either.
Definitely looking forward to more.
4/4/2020 c4 s.k.f.f.f
damn, that was awesome. I loved seeing his prowess and sticking up to his beliefs. I wonder if the the magical v swords will stand up to lightsabers.
damn, that was awesome. I loved seeing his prowess and sticking up to his beliefs. I wonder if the the magical v swords will stand up to lightsabers.
4/3/2020 c4 T-MikeyD
Damnit, man. That was strangely beautiful. Oberyn is gonna be pissed all to hell and back. Meh, there's still the Mountain. Also, after that Ned is gonna be even more reticent to allow Nox to train the kids, as I would be if I were in his shoes. Great chapter, though
Damnit, man. That was strangely beautiful. Oberyn is gonna be pissed all to hell and back. Meh, there's still the Mountain. Also, after that Ned is gonna be even more reticent to allow Nox to train the kids, as I would be if I were in his shoes. Great chapter, though
4/3/2020 c4 Mark1
Nice fight scenes... Please continue
Nice fight scenes... Please continue