for Song of A Northern Sorcerer1/22/2021 c14 Kuman
I really liked this chapter. The reactions of the Small Council to Gerion's return and the Northern expedition to Valyria was spot on. If only Gerion was awake for the entire trip then I'm sure their reactions would have been even funnier.
I wonder why the Wildlings would bother travelling all this way south? The Stark contingent was at least a thousand miles from the bride of bones so why would a wildling raid so far south?
Most importantly the Direwolves have come! My absolute favorite characters in the books and yes I see the Direwolves as characters and I'm so glad you kept Mama Wolf alive. I wonder where the father is though? I should think Nox wouldn't mind a Direwolf of his own. I'm really liking your Ned so far btw. Now if only Jon would stop blushing like a maiden whenever a girl talks to him...
I really liked this chapter. The reactions of the Small Council to Gerion's return and the Northern expedition to Valyria was spot on. If only Gerion was awake for the entire trip then I'm sure their reactions would have been even funnier.
I wonder why the Wildlings would bother travelling all this way south? The Stark contingent was at least a thousand miles from the bride of bones so why would a wildling raid so far south?
Most importantly the Direwolves have come! My absolute favorite characters in the books and yes I see the Direwolves as characters and I'm so glad you kept Mama Wolf alive. I wonder where the father is though? I should think Nox wouldn't mind a Direwolf of his own. I'm really liking your Ned so far btw. Now if only Jon would stop blushing like a maiden whenever a girl talks to him...
1/22/2021 c14 
101VFSNAKE
Now that is interesting. I suspected in the last chapter that she was pregnant. Glad my suspicions were proven correct. Unfortunately that also Kate’s her a target for house Lannister and Tywin to do something stupid. Ambitious but stupid. Wonder how he will react to his brother returning with their sword. And the north having dire wolves now? A certain Tully woman will not like that. Of well she can sit their and suck lemons. LOL! I’m flash Osha is there. No doubt she will stir things up and Robb being in a relationship with Robb will be interesting too. Can’t wait for Ned to tell Jon the truth. And shouldn’t what happened on the expedition warrant a legitimization from the king at this point? Jon did do something worthy of it.
101VFSNAKENow that is interesting. I suspected in the last chapter that she was pregnant. Glad my suspicions were proven correct. Unfortunately that also Kate’s her a target for house Lannister and Tywin to do something stupid. Ambitious but stupid. Wonder how he will react to his brother returning with their sword. And the north having dire wolves now? A certain Tully woman will not like that. Of well she can sit their and suck lemons. LOL! I’m flash Osha is there. No doubt she will stir things up and Robb being in a relationship with Robb will be interesting too. Can’t wait for Ned to tell Jon the truth. And shouldn’t what happened on the expedition warrant a legitimization from the king at this point? Jon did do something worthy of it.
1/22/2021 c14 Asasyn13
1. Sorry, but I need to draw your attention to the quality of the chapter content. Some plots were badly or hastily developed. Still, good job :)
2. You have to write about Geryon's meeting with Tywin and you have to do it better (more violently, emotionally). Oh, and let Cersei continue pushing for putting ,,Brightroar'' to Joffrey.
3. The maesters should try to disrupt the Robb's fair somehow. Maybe by Faith's hands?
4. I'm still for the RobbWynafryd pair. What about doing it like this- Talisa knows about Robb's feeling but decides to reject it because of their difference or for the pursuit of knowledge.
5. Let the mysterious metal be beskar. Nox's reaction will be amazing. Oh, and let the survey map show the sources of other metals (gold, silver, etc.)
6. Please, let one book explain the origin of the Faith of the Seven as a joke of the drunken Archons
7. What do you think about introducing some Sith customs to Starks? First suggestion - Sith tattoos and alchemy.
1. Sorry, but I need to draw your attention to the quality of the chapter content. Some plots were badly or hastily developed. Still, good job :)
2. You have to write about Geryon's meeting with Tywin and you have to do it better (more violently, emotionally). Oh, and let Cersei continue pushing for putting ,,Brightroar'' to Joffrey.
3. The maesters should try to disrupt the Robb's fair somehow. Maybe by Faith's hands?
4. I'm still for the RobbWynafryd pair. What about doing it like this- Talisa knows about Robb's feeling but decides to reject it because of their difference or for the pursuit of knowledge.
5. Let the mysterious metal be beskar. Nox's reaction will be amazing. Oh, and let the survey map show the sources of other metals (gold, silver, etc.)
6. Please, let one book explain the origin of the Faith of the Seven as a joke of the drunken Archons
7. What do you think about introducing some Sith customs to Starks? First suggestion - Sith tattoos and alchemy.
1/22/2021 c14 Guest
What next the north is numenor
I mean the starks is always so hyped like in every crossover like some gods
What next the north is numenor
I mean the starks is always so hyped like in every crossover like some gods
1/22/2021 c14 gageelliott
Thanks for the chapter! I picked this up after the last one and am loving it. Keep up the quality content!
Thanks for the chapter! I picked this up after the last one and am loving it. Keep up the quality content!
1/22/2021 c14 7FallenMetalGod
Great story, really enjoying it. I do like it when Eddard gets himself a Direwolf too. I especially like this vision of Eddard, who is a nice mixture of Theon Hungry Wolf and maybe a small bit of Cregan Stark too. Eddard is both battles harden and slowly showing the political keenness that I wished Eddard had in the original Song of Ice and Fire.
7FallenMetalGodGreat story, really enjoying it. I do like it when Eddard gets himself a Direwolf too. I especially like this vision of Eddard, who is a nice mixture of Theon Hungry Wolf and maybe a small bit of Cregan Stark too. Eddard is both battles harden and slowly showing the political keenness that I wished Eddard had in the original Song of Ice and Fire.
1/22/2021 c14 MattKennedy
So much awesome! :) Nox finally found out about his baby. Jon saved Osha. Momma direwolf is still alive and bonding with Ned. And baby direwolves are the cutest! :D Looking forward to the Stark kids getting to bond with the puppies and Nox watching on interestedly and to Ned finally telling Jon his long kept secret.
So much awesome! :) Nox finally found out about his baby. Jon saved Osha. Momma direwolf is still alive and bonding with Ned. And baby direwolves are the cutest! :D Looking forward to the Stark kids getting to bond with the puppies and Nox watching on interestedly and to Ned finally telling Jon his long kept secret.
1/22/2021 c14 JCY7
I love this story, great chapter!
Nox is A great representation of a somewhat benevolent sith and Jon is developing very naturally. Keep it up!
I love this story, great chapter!
Nox is A great representation of a somewhat benevolent sith and Jon is developing very naturally. Keep it up!