for Song of A Northern Sorcerer12/21/2020 c13 Guest
I hope we get one more chap before new year it would be good to see nox come home to see the baby being born at least
I hope we get one more chap before new year it would be good to see nox come home to see the baby being born at least
12/21/2020 c13 Code Viper
great chapter, honestly have 2 or 3 wives is ok since its within the realm of believability especially in a feudal time period, I think people are just scared of this being like 5 or more ridiculous number
great chapter, honestly have 2 or 3 wives is ok since its within the realm of believability especially in a feudal time period, I think people are just scared of this being like 5 or more ridiculous number
12/21/2020 c13 
5Darth Ralan
damn... Shireen is Force Sensitive that's suprisingly pleasant. and shit... ceased "M" ... that's a new term LOL. man, Jon is still green in ladies enecounter... can wait to see him be a ladykiller. this chapter is worth the wait. keep save!
5Darth Ralandamn... Shireen is Force Sensitive that's suprisingly pleasant. and shit... ceased "M" ... that's a new term LOL. man, Jon is still green in ladies enecounter... can wait to see him be a ladykiller. this chapter is worth the wait. keep save!
12/21/2020 c13 orthodox1057
Gendry trained as a force forger and a sith juggernaut - the thickest plate armour and a hammer to smash through hordes of enemies. Imagine Malgus' roaring leaps only with a valyrian steel hammer to crush the opponent into a fine paste.
Gendry trained as a force forger and a sith juggernaut - the thickest plate armour and a hammer to smash through hordes of enemies. Imagine Malgus' roaring leaps only with a valyrian steel hammer to crush the opponent into a fine paste.
12/21/2020 c13 GoetterKomplex
Well, this Chapter was a surprise, but certainly a welcome one. I like the way you write Arianne, she feels really in Character. As does Stannis. Nice job, keep it up!
Well, this Chapter was a surprise, but certainly a welcome one. I like the way you write Arianne, she feels really in Character. As does Stannis. Nice job, keep it up!
12/20/2020 c13 Guest
Stealth full invisibility/intangibility
Wereshadowcat
'Once is happenstance. Twice is coincidence. The third time it's enemy action'.”
I thought she was a baby when she got greyscale
Want the student to surpass teacher duty to future generations you might say
Stealth full invisibility/intangibility
Wereshadowcat
'Once is happenstance. Twice is coincidence. The third time it's enemy action'.”
I thought she was a baby when she got greyscale
Want the student to surpass teacher duty to future generations you might say
12/20/2020 c13 Guest
wow
more please
wow
more please
12/20/2020 c13 chickenbass
I'm happy your character development lasts longer than "This is holding you back." "Your right!"
Lots of questions, lots of set up. I really hope Jon and Dany are a Dyad. That was the my absolute favorite part of Rise of Skywalker!
Overall a great transition chapter, stuff like this reminds me of the mammoth distances the have to travel on planetos. it's a great way to ground the universe.
Have a happy holidays!
I'm happy your character development lasts longer than "This is holding you back." "Your right!"
Lots of questions, lots of set up. I really hope Jon and Dany are a Dyad. That was the my absolute favorite part of Rise of Skywalker!
Overall a great transition chapter, stuff like this reminds me of the mammoth distances the have to travel on planetos. it's a great way to ground the universe.
Have a happy holidays!
12/20/2020 c13 kalipendragon
What? This just gets better and better! Who knew Shireen would have so much potential?! Great chapter!
What? This just gets better and better! Who knew Shireen would have so much potential?! Great chapter!
12/20/2020 c13 Guest
Nyra is it a boy or a girl I can't wait to find out.
Nyra is it a boy or a girl I can't wait to find out.
12/20/2020 c13 Sage1988
Was absolutely delighted to see another update so soon, loved every single moment of it and was really interested when you had the Valyrians have primitive holocrons! Can't wait to find out what's in them although given the familiar ritual and these holocrons I am starting to wonder if some Sith or Jedi came to Valyria early on.
I am surprised to see Shireen has the force in her, interesting little twist that I can't wait to see explored. As for Jon/Arianne its a pairing I haven't really seen before so its a good thing to read.
Was absolutely delighted to see another update so soon, loved every single moment of it and was really interested when you had the Valyrians have primitive holocrons! Can't wait to find out what's in them although given the familiar ritual and these holocrons I am starting to wonder if some Sith or Jedi came to Valyria early on.
I am surprised to see Shireen has the force in her, interesting little twist that I can't wait to see explored. As for Jon/Arianne its a pairing I haven't really seen before so its a good thing to read.
12/20/2020 c13 Guest
As much as I dislike Jon/Daenerys and prefer pairings such as Jon/Arianne and Jon/Myrcella, please do what you want to do, I really enjoy this fic and that's thanks to you writing what you want to. I have seen many good stories fall apart with the author trying to please everyone, and this both my favorite asoiaf and star wars fic, so I don't want to see it happening with this story. This was a really good chapter and I am waiting eagerly for the next one
As much as I dislike Jon/Daenerys and prefer pairings such as Jon/Arianne and Jon/Myrcella, please do what you want to do, I really enjoy this fic and that's thanks to you writing what you want to. I have seen many good stories fall apart with the author trying to please everyone, and this both my favorite asoiaf and star wars fic, so I don't want to see it happening with this story. This was a really good chapter and I am waiting eagerly for the next one
12/20/2020 c13 MattKennedy
Hmm...I'm curious to find out what Jon's dreams of Dany mean. Finding out Shireen has powerful potential with the Force is really neat and Nox gets another future acolyte.
Really cool that the crystals turned out to be a type of primitive holocron. :D
Hmm...I'm curious to find out what Jon's dreams of Dany mean. Finding out Shireen has powerful potential with the Force is really neat and Nox gets another future acolyte.
Really cool that the crystals turned out to be a type of primitive holocron. :D