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4/2/2020 c4 lilabennet
Ah, Barbrey Dustin aka "Plot hole number 17". Since when does the childless widow of a lord retain power over her husband's lands when he dies? As soon as Willam Dustin died without issue the line would have been traced to the next male heir and he would have taken control of Barrowton. Even if the line had dwindled down so far that they had to go all the way back to before the conquest and ask a current member of the Company of the Rose to come home, they still would have found him rather than keeping her in charge. But, noooo, GRRM doesn't care about little details like that. She has a grudge against the Starks, so therefore she needs to have enough power to be a major PITA rather than just a minor one. The least he could have done would be to give her a son who she raised to be a major mama's boy and to do whatever she says. Then, GRRM could have had all the same plot points for her, but it would actually make sense. This is just insulting.

Sorry. I rant sometimes. In other news, I am really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work.
4/2/2020 c2 guest
"it sets its eyes on the stars overhead?" "ready and willing to reach out for what lay beyond?"
Are you high or something? how could the night king and co. possibly leave the planet? and even if they did they would be wiped out instantly by any space faring civilization
4/2/2020 c4 3grovepjp
4/2/2020 c4 4hordac85
4/2/2020 c4 2te.nellis
That was awesome! I loved it! Keep it up!
4/2/2020 c3 4hordac85
4/2/2020 c4 1DawnEater
Damn bro, Lorch execution was brutal and badass, amazing job.
4/2/2020 c4 5Darth Ralan
the trolling of lorch is the best scene you made! a such satisfaction especially since the judge is a sithlord. can't wait for the next chapters!
4/2/2020 c4 Guest

Human replica droid

Build blasters, droid army, ships

medpack- diagnostics such as medisensors and also could provide flexclamps, synthflesh, irrigation bulbs, bacta, kolto, spray-bandages, bacta patches, spray hypos, bone stabilizers, antiseptics, medical drugs, coagulants, stimulants such as stim-shots, and other essential medicines for the treatment of wounds.

Terraform processor
4/2/2020 c4 Guest
4/2/2020 c4 2rc48177
In honor of the life of Ser Lorch, Let me play you a sad song on the world's smallest violin.

what, i didn't say it'd be a long song.
4/2/2020 c2 4hordac85
4/2/2020 c4 1aLazycloud
Bad. Ass. i love it
4/2/2020 c4 TheSoundOfThunderingEngines
Yes new chapter! And a good One. This is much better than your harry potter X Game of throne Fic. I didn't mind Tywin too much in this chapter. "Help...Me." NOPE.
4/2/2020 c4 Ravicboy
Thank you for awasome chapter! cant wait for next one.
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