for Song of A Northern Sorcerer12/9/2020 c12 
2Azazel72
Truly a well thought and fascinating story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
2Azazel72Truly a well thought and fascinating story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
12/8/2020 c12 Hiei-Uchiha
Oh man, Arriane has Jon in her crosshairs, poor boy! Now that would make for interesting pairing, one of my more favorite non Danaerys pairings! You have me on hooks now in anticipation of the next chapter!
Oh man, Arriane has Jon in her crosshairs, poor boy! Now that would make for interesting pairing, one of my more favorite non Danaerys pairings! You have me on hooks now in anticipation of the next chapter!
12/8/2020 c12 LuketheDuke
A very entertaining chapter and story so far. Keep up the good work.
A very entertaining chapter and story so far. Keep up the good work.
12/8/2020 c12 Sauron's Wrath
I spit out my water at "the numerous ropes and wenches." It's winches you goose, this isn't a pleasure barge! Speaking of ships Gerion's ship was called the Laughing Lion, not the Lion's pride.
Awww. I was really hoping we would see Jon construct his own lightsaber, though I guess it makes sense because he has no idea how they work. But that would've been really cool since the lightsaber is meant to almost reflect the person wielding it. Also I don't agree with him having a white lightsaber, I imagine Jon as more of a light blue lightsaber kind of guy, like cyan. I heavily disagree with naming a lightsaber, it's just an absolute bullshit distraction that would completely derail and ruin the story.
Overall okay chapter. It's a nice break from the action in the last few chapters, and it's oddly refreshing to see the game in play again, even if it ends with Nox being slightly OP. Seriously, some of the stuff you're making him do is Starkiller level. Please give him some flaws! If he already has some, please point them out because I'm not seeing any.
I spit out my water at "the numerous ropes and wenches." It's winches you goose, this isn't a pleasure barge! Speaking of ships Gerion's ship was called the Laughing Lion, not the Lion's pride.
Awww. I was really hoping we would see Jon construct his own lightsaber, though I guess it makes sense because he has no idea how they work. But that would've been really cool since the lightsaber is meant to almost reflect the person wielding it. Also I don't agree with him having a white lightsaber, I imagine Jon as more of a light blue lightsaber kind of guy, like cyan. I heavily disagree with naming a lightsaber, it's just an absolute bullshit distraction that would completely derail and ruin the story.
Overall okay chapter. It's a nice break from the action in the last few chapters, and it's oddly refreshing to see the game in play again, even if it ends with Nox being slightly OP. Seriously, some of the stuff you're making him do is Starkiller level. Please give him some flaws! If he already has some, please point them out because I'm not seeing any.
12/7/2020 c12 Guest
Pls release on week , even it short but it still perfect
Pls release on week , even it short but it still perfect
12/7/2020 c8 Guest
I almost liked this story
But the romance with Nyra ruined it for me
I almost liked this story
But the romance with Nyra ruined it for me
12/7/2020 c12 cameron1812
Wow. What a treat. The triumphal return, politics of the realm, spars, fights, abilities revealed... Quite the gift! Thank you!
Wow. What a treat. The triumphal return, politics of the realm, spars, fights, abilities revealed... Quite the gift! Thank you!
12/7/2020 c12 HoJSJSJA
A great chapter, loved the part with Arianne. Can't wait to see what she has planned for Jon.
A great chapter, loved the part with Arianne. Can't wait to see what she has planned for Jon.
12/7/2020 c12 Shroud Knight
Great chapter, as always. Loved it from start to finish, though tbh that's the kind of quality I've started to expect from this story, the author and their brainstorming partner. Honestly, it might actually be THE best SWTOR crossover I've ever read, not just one of them.
Glad to see that Jon finally has his lightsaber. Can't wait to see him put it to good use, as well as everyone's reactions once they realize he has one. Might even inspire Robb and Arya to push themselves harder and earn the position of an Apprentice, as well.
I do wonder what it is that Nox has felt in the North. As some others already said, I also suspect that it's most likely a child, but anything could happen. Could be some drama, and knowing this story, it would definitely be a very entertaining read.
Anyway, thank you and your partner for your constant work on this and the amount of effort that's clearly put into it. I regularly check my alerts in the hopes that the story has been updated. It's the only one I follow as closely as I do.
Stay safe out there, and I hope that everything goes well for you in life.
Great chapter, as always. Loved it from start to finish, though tbh that's the kind of quality I've started to expect from this story, the author and their brainstorming partner. Honestly, it might actually be THE best SWTOR crossover I've ever read, not just one of them.
Glad to see that Jon finally has his lightsaber. Can't wait to see him put it to good use, as well as everyone's reactions once they realize he has one. Might even inspire Robb and Arya to push themselves harder and earn the position of an Apprentice, as well.
I do wonder what it is that Nox has felt in the North. As some others already said, I also suspect that it's most likely a child, but anything could happen. Could be some drama, and knowing this story, it would definitely be a very entertaining read.
Anyway, thank you and your partner for your constant work on this and the amount of effort that's clearly put into it. I regularly check my alerts in the hopes that the story has been updated. It's the only one I follow as closely as I do.
Stay safe out there, and I hope that everything goes well for you in life.
12/6/2020 c12 kalipendragon
Woooo! Go Jon! He's getting more and more badass by the chapter and I love it! lol great chapter!
Woooo! Go Jon! He's getting more and more badass by the chapter and I love it! lol great chapter!
12/6/2020 c12 64mellra
So this is just a guess, but I think Nyra might have gotten more than Nox's mask after that night of passion before the voyage started. Anyway, great chapter as always and way to keep us guessing on who's going to get lucky with everyone's favorite bastard. Personally, I'm Ygritte all the way, but as long as it's done well I don't mind a little variety. Can't wait to see how the rest of the visit to Dorne plays out, and if we'll get back to the North next chapter. Keep up the amazing work!
64mellraSo this is just a guess, but I think Nyra might have gotten more than Nox's mask after that night of passion before the voyage started. Anyway, great chapter as always and way to keep us guessing on who's going to get lucky with everyone's favorite bastard. Personally, I'm Ygritte all the way, but as long as it's done well I don't mind a little variety. Can't wait to see how the rest of the visit to Dorne plays out, and if we'll get back to the North next chapter. Keep up the amazing work!
12/6/2020 c12 Guest
Like Ygritte
Like Ygritte