for Song of A Northern Sorcerer12/15/2020 c6 Guest
Love it
Love it
12/13/2020 c5 
3Ikasuki
How the F did he get hurt? I mean sure as a sorcerer he doesn’t have the best armor. But he still should posses a shield and protection that are literally thousand of year beyond what can be accomplished on this world. That is without even taking in consideration force augmentation or strengthening
As his current titles shows he is a late game character that should be able to destroy enemy with palatseel armor vibroblade and training by the dozen. Problem is... this makes him so much OP in this setting there is nothing to tell... but trying to nerf him so blatantly doesn’t renforce his strength not the story it just feel like a cheap patch correction to force plot and action that shouldn’t be necessary
3IkasukiHow the F did he get hurt? I mean sure as a sorcerer he doesn’t have the best armor. But he still should posses a shield and protection that are literally thousand of year beyond what can be accomplished on this world. That is without even taking in consideration force augmentation or strengthening
As his current titles shows he is a late game character that should be able to destroy enemy with palatseel armor vibroblade and training by the dozen. Problem is... this makes him so much OP in this setting there is nothing to tell... but trying to nerf him so blatantly doesn’t renforce his strength not the story it just feel like a cheap patch correction to force plot and action that shouldn’t be necessary
12/12/2020 c1 darthkratos24
This had promise...till the immense unneeded info dump at the beginning oh and also I personally don't like blind characters find it hard and off putting to ironically see from there POV so I left
This had promise...till the immense unneeded info dump at the beginning oh and also I personally don't like blind characters find it hard and off putting to ironically see from there POV so I left
12/12/2020 c12 Guest
Rules for Rulers
Rules for Rulers
12/10/2020 c12 5TheInsufferablePedant
Thanks for the updoot, hope you take these as constructive instead of "i cOulD h Ve dOne it bEtTer"
IMHO, Asha should have said something like, "It was clear to Asha that the Volantene woman was more interested in what lay between Nox's ears than between his legs."
Again, when it comes to Jon's saber, I feel like something along the lines ofJon had no idea what the table full of odds and ends did, but he did as his master instructed and reached out with the Force. Handling each object and examining them more with his mystical senses than physical ones, he assembled his light saber." If you wanted to have Jon assemble one without knowing what the parts did.
Pretty sure Ironborn wear armor at sea though, like, isn't drowning the way they prefer to go; aside from in glorious battle ofc. Also, Valyrian steel throwing axes? wtf, first time she throws them someone will just grab them and run.
5TheInsufferablePedantThanks for the updoot, hope you take these as constructive instead of "i cOulD h Ve dOne it bEtTer"
IMHO, Asha should have said something like, "It was clear to Asha that the Volantene woman was more interested in what lay between Nox's ears than between his legs."
Again, when it comes to Jon's saber, I feel like something along the lines ofJon had no idea what the table full of odds and ends did, but he did as his master instructed and reached out with the Force. Handling each object and examining them more with his mystical senses than physical ones, he assembled his light saber." If you wanted to have Jon assemble one without knowing what the parts did.
Pretty sure Ironborn wear armor at sea though, like, isn't drowning the way they prefer to go; aside from in glorious battle ofc. Also, Valyrian steel throwing axes? wtf, first time she throws them someone will just grab them and run.
12/10/2020 c12 Guest
Grace O'Malley
Anne Bonny
Pirate Queen songs
Grace O'Malley
Anne Bonny
Pirate Queen songs
12/10/2020 c12 Guest
CGP Grey how to be a pirate
CGP Grey how to be a pirate
12/9/2020 c12 5Azazel72
Truly a well thought and fascinating story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
5Azazel72Truly a well thought and fascinating story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
12/8/2020 c12 Hiei-Uchiha
Oh man, Arriane has Jon in her crosshairs, poor boy! Now that would make for interesting pairing, one of my more favorite non Danaerys pairings! You have me on hooks now in anticipation of the next chapter!
Oh man, Arriane has Jon in her crosshairs, poor boy! Now that would make for interesting pairing, one of my more favorite non Danaerys pairings! You have me on hooks now in anticipation of the next chapter!