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3/11/2020 c1 1TheWateringWizard
Oh man I’m gonna love this story too ! Tellemicus recommended it and il not disappointed ! Seeing a Dark Lord of the Sith in GoT is gonna be awesome
3/10/2020 c3 Guest
Please dont make Daenerys chosen one or some sith force wielding prodigy
there way to many where she either is a strong force user
or a jedi or sith
shes already fireproof, and has dragons isnt that enough
plus you have to admitt if Daenerys was sith or jedi
she would try to get rid of Nox
3/10/2020 c3 Guest
whould it be ironic
if Catelyn had an affair and had a bastard
but didnt tell Ned
but still treats Jon like shit
3/10/2020 c3 lighthawkmaster54
Ok, first I am loving this story so far! And now Nox has the opportunity to show Ned what he is offering to teach his children. But, how will this affect the relations with the other kingdoms? And don't think I did not see how that sentence with Nox talking to Ned was worded... Anyway, keep writing please! And don't let haters keep you down!
3/9/2020 c3 s.k.f.f.f
oh man, i love it. i hope nox stays, bu the time edd comes back the north will be extensively grown in leaps and bounds of technology. it be too early fox nox to zhow himself to the south and his plans.
3/9/2020 c3 Guest
Story is lit af
3/9/2020 c2 s.k.f.f.f
amazing, i find this story intrigujng, i will defintely watch for it and would love to see jon rise as a wolve dragon with box on his side.
3/9/2020 c3 Ashborn2271
I understand he landed in Westeros but he should’ve been more smarter after learning about their history, he should’ve gotten the first boat to one essos city and made himself king and conquer and it would’ve been easy who would be able to defy him the red priest? The house of undying? Please just a bunch of magicians tricks infront of a legitimate Sith Lord but in Westeros he has to face the raven, the children and the winter soldiers, still don’t know why he is here I fact he even indirectly told everything to the raven who was spying threw the tree. Hope this isn’t one of those stories where he will be ruining after the stark children or trying to make Jon king, seriously with the force you become one yourself in months. Why share power with others no sith would ever do that, not even Jedi’s do it.
3/9/2020 c3 Marksbay
Ignore the haters, and keep up the good work
3/9/2020 c3 1Vandun
great chapter, but my only nitpick is would any lord use the S.O.B curse word so casually?
3/9/2020 c3 MrCcoz
I really enjoy the pacing if this story and I like how Alim Nox fits in well at Winterfell. The Wolfsblood being The Force us a very cool connection and I can't wait to see how the Starks adapt to this game changer
3/9/2020 c3 2te.nellis
Fantastic! I loved it! Keep it up
3/9/2020 c3 Seawurm
I liked this chapter!

I don't know what problems some people have with this story. But I think its good. I will confess that my knowledge of Star Wars lore is limited to the original movie trilogy. Regardless, your writing is coherent and structurally well put together. So I can't wait to see what happens next.
3/9/2020 c3 GrimLurker
I like. A lot. The differences between your Noxes are lovely, and i do appreciate that Ziri appeared much raunchier than the male Sith. Then again, i do get why a female in male-dominated circumstances would use that as a power tool while a man might not even consider it that way. I'm also fascinated by his long play.
I wish you inspiration for your writing, and him good fortune with his little servant girl..
/g
3/8/2020 c3 scyfly
i can def see how the force is magic in westeros it is abstract enough for it to be plausible, so dont worry about giving any overly lohg explanations.
the story is however a little long, and by that i mean far to long, to the point that its almost boring. im also wondering why a sith from a space flight civilisation would know how to make glass or a furnace for steel. these a absolete concepts for such advanced ppl. do i know how plumming works? sure but i do not know how to make copper pipes, i also know how to put them in a building so it works yet i do not know how to build a torch that burns hot enough to weld the pipes. there are thousands of subjects i know very well and could help rise an industrial revolution if they are at base tech we were at 1900 but to do the same for middevial society? no clue and even if you do to put in the infrastructre to make it happen will take a life time

though this is rather minor and i do like world building, even if you only left a decade to do any before war comes.
i do hope you'll kill lady stark, god i hate that dumb bitch.
how did the first men of westeros ever lose against the andals if they could use the force? primitive it may be but minor percog in sword fighting is a big fucking help.
please do try and write a little more compact your plot is good your writing is good it would be a shame for it to be ruined by being to long
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