for Song of A Northern Sorcerer12/4/2020 c12 Mister LaGuardia
Longterm, Nox doesn't really need to plant Jon or an ally on the throne to gain real powerif he can destroy or remake the maesters (which is a conflict I'd love to see) he can gain control of the secrets of all the noble families and scatter his influence throughout the realm, while allowing as much technological and Force/magic breakthroughs as he wants.
Longterm, Nox doesn't really need to plant Jon or an ally on the throne to gain real powerif he can destroy or remake the maesters (which is a conflict I'd love to see) he can gain control of the secrets of all the noble families and scatter his influence throughout the realm, while allowing as much technological and Force/magic breakthroughs as he wants.
12/4/2020 c12 Shadefyre
Sweeeet! That was awesome I really wish that this could become a show or cartoon dude you
Sweeeet! That was awesome I really wish that this could become a show or cartoon dude you
12/4/2020 c12 Mister LaGuardia
Amazing as always; I'm loving the Jon X Arianne dynamic, and can't wait to see what else she'll do to leave an impression on him. I'm hoping to see Tywin in the next chapterI like that you made him more strategic and less ragey than most stories give him credit for. Given your characterization of him, he's going to have to realize how powerful Nox truly is once he returns Gerion, who can use the sword to back up his story.
Amazing as always; I'm loving the Jon X Arianne dynamic, and can't wait to see what else she'll do to leave an impression on him. I'm hoping to see Tywin in the next chapterI like that you made him more strategic and less ragey than most stories give him credit for. Given your characterization of him, he's going to have to realize how powerful Nox truly is once he returns Gerion, who can use the sword to back up his story.
12/4/2020 c12 FoxPantherWolf
I’m hoping that Arianne’s seduction of Jon fails because the situation is a too close to pedophilia for comfort. I mean older mentally/emotionally and sexually experienced woman going after a 13 year old boy barely through puberty (even if he looks like a 15 year old he’s 13) is just uuugh. Especially because this isn’t anything like two young people in love deciding to have sex as an expression of their passion for each other. This is her wanting to seduce him to manipulate him into being and doing what she wants. It feels far too much like grooming. I hope it gets stopped by Nox before it can happen. I wouldn’t be opposed to Arianne doing the seducing if Jon was a little older but even in medieval times nobles didn’t have sex with 13 year olds unless they were pedophiles.
Anyway keep up the good work. I’m really enjoying the story and I’ve read other stories of yours. You’re a really good author and I look forward to reading more of your work.
I’m hoping that Arianne’s seduction of Jon fails because the situation is a too close to pedophilia for comfort. I mean older mentally/emotionally and sexually experienced woman going after a 13 year old boy barely through puberty (even if he looks like a 15 year old he’s 13) is just uuugh. Especially because this isn’t anything like two young people in love deciding to have sex as an expression of their passion for each other. This is her wanting to seduce him to manipulate him into being and doing what she wants. It feels far too much like grooming. I hope it gets stopped by Nox before it can happen. I wouldn’t be opposed to Arianne doing the seducing if Jon was a little older but even in medieval times nobles didn’t have sex with 13 year olds unless they were pedophiles.
Anyway keep up the good work. I’m really enjoying the story and I’ve read other stories of yours. You’re a really good author and I look forward to reading more of your work.
12/4/2020 c12 George Cristian810
I truly hope that you will not go the route of jon king , but maybe a north independent and maybe with riverlands and reach trough rob and margery marriage and jon and arriane and jon can become the next head of a force order .
I truly hope that you will not go the route of jon king , but maybe a north independent and maybe with riverlands and reach trough rob and margery marriage and jon and arriane and jon can become the next head of a force order .
12/4/2020 c12 balut76
This story is always a pure delight to read when it updates.
Also, Arianne Dany. No incest is best, plus Arianne needs more time in the spotlight, and Jon/Aegon x Arianne would unite the North and South in the game.
This story is always a pure delight to read when it updates.
Also, Arianne Dany. No incest is best, plus Arianne needs more time in the spotlight, and Jon/Aegon x Arianne would unite the North and South in the game.
12/4/2020 c12 Guest
Love this story, im betting nyra is pregnant! I like how while nox is OP compared to 90 percent of things on the planet he's not invincible. And there are enough threats that could potentially kill him in a fight. The other darkness scattered across the lands. He also has to prepare both jon to take the throne with the other pieces in his vision being near him , make the north stronger and get the north enough allies so the white walkers don't win.
Love this story, im betting nyra is pregnant! I like how while nox is OP compared to 90 percent of things on the planet he's not invincible. And there are enough threats that could potentially kill him in a fight. The other darkness scattered across the lands. He also has to prepare both jon to take the throne with the other pieces in his vision being near him , make the north stronger and get the north enough allies so the white walkers don't win.
12/4/2020 c12 ZhaWarudo
Naming swords, Bleach way or just naming them nornally? It'd be cool but a power up would require more powerful enemies as well.
Naming swords, Bleach way or just naming them nornally? It'd be cool but a power up would require more powerful enemies as well.
12/4/2020 c12 
5mad thought
It would be nice to see a Jon X Arianne pairing I can definitely see it working out. Also seems Nox attracts a lot as well. I feel the Stepstones might be the next arena of conflict given how pirates are generally stupid. Gerion's survival will shake up the Westerlands heck he might prompt a civil war later. Update when you can.
5mad thoughtIt would be nice to see a Jon X Arianne pairing I can definitely see it working out. Also seems Nox attracts a lot as well. I feel the Stepstones might be the next arena of conflict given how pirates are generally stupid. Gerion's survival will shake up the Westerlands heck he might prompt a civil war later. Update when you can.
12/4/2020 c12 Anon
Great chapter! I was hoping to get back to the North but this was also entertaining. Good things come to those who wait.
Great chapter! I was hoping to get back to the North but this was also entertaining. Good things come to those who wait.
12/4/2020 c12 7bored peasant
Trying to figure out the ages of all the younger characters. How old is Asha, Dacey, Small Jon etc? Not really getting a read on them from the chapters.
7bored peasantTrying to figure out the ages of all the younger characters. How old is Asha, Dacey, Small Jon etc? Not really getting a read on them from the chapters.
12/4/2020 c12 doraemax
Hmm... I was very much reminded of Prince of Persia, or even Disney's Aladdin, with Jasmine facsimile playing Arianne. She's quite impressive here...but Daenerys still reign supreme. Plus, Jon is unfortunately too young...for whatever she's used to playing with. True, Beauty is Power, but unfortunately for her, it's the least of the attribute she needs to play to hook Jon. The timing is just... too soon.
I forget, did Nox told Jon of his origin? Or did Jon's instinct serves him well, here? heh.
Loving this. Thank you
Hmm... I was very much reminded of Prince of Persia, or even Disney's Aladdin, with Jasmine facsimile playing Arianne. She's quite impressive here...but Daenerys still reign supreme. Plus, Jon is unfortunately too young...for whatever she's used to playing with. True, Beauty is Power, but unfortunately for her, it's the least of the attribute she needs to play to hook Jon. The timing is just... too soon.
I forget, did Nox told Jon of his origin? Or did Jon's instinct serves him well, here? heh.
Loving this. Thank you
12/4/2020 c12 InfinityMask
I have bad feelings about Nyra. Hope Cat didn’t do something foolish in her stupid pride and denial. Sigh.
Anyway love Jon vs daemon and his fight with Gerold. I think people would feel that fight as validation enough that Jon is Ashara’s.
Nox really humiliated Gerold huh? And expose Gerold Insecurities.
Hmm the maester would probably send raven on what Jon and Nox do. I hope nothing bad would happen. Tho I wonder, would they demand to be able to see and read the book Nox found in Valyria?
I have bad feelings about Nyra. Hope Cat didn’t do something foolish in her stupid pride and denial. Sigh.
Anyway love Jon vs daemon and his fight with Gerold. I think people would feel that fight as validation enough that Jon is Ashara’s.
Nox really humiliated Gerold huh? And expose Gerold Insecurities.
Hmm the maester would probably send raven on what Jon and Nox do. I hope nothing bad would happen. Tho I wonder, would they demand to be able to see and read the book Nox found in Valyria?
12/4/2020 c12 2miguelgiuliano.co
very good chapter without a doubt this chapter is a masterpiece.
I really liked how you are raising the growth of certain characters such as Yara and Jon. but without a doubt I was fascinated by how you have written to Arianne, I like how you are presenting her.
I hope Jon has an orgy obviously the older sand snakes Yara and Arianne would be great to see Jon somewhat disoriented the next day.
Regarding Valyrian steel weapons I suppose that some will go to some important houses for the plans of Nox and company in order to make some commercial alliances.
Another point is that I can't wait to see what will happen in Jon's future from now on.
It would be great if Obara decides to go North and maybe in a few years he decides to accompany Yara to the Iron Islands and cause some 'order' xd.
2miguelgiuliano.covery good chapter without a doubt this chapter is a masterpiece.
I really liked how you are raising the growth of certain characters such as Yara and Jon. but without a doubt I was fascinated by how you have written to Arianne, I like how you are presenting her.
I hope Jon has an orgy obviously the older sand snakes Yara and Arianne would be great to see Jon somewhat disoriented the next day.
Regarding Valyrian steel weapons I suppose that some will go to some important houses for the plans of Nox and company in order to make some commercial alliances.
Another point is that I can't wait to see what will happen in Jon's future from now on.
It would be great if Obara decides to go North and maybe in a few years he decides to accompany Yara to the Iron Islands and cause some 'order' xd.