for Song of A Northern Sorcerer12/4/2020 c12 doraemax
Hmm... I was very much reminded of Prince of Persia, or even Disney's Aladdin, with Jasmine facsimile playing Arianne. She's quite impressive here...but Daenerys still reign supreme. Plus, Jon is unfortunately too young...for whatever she's used to playing with. True, Beauty is Power, but unfortunately for her, it's the least of the attribute she needs to play to hook Jon. The timing is just... too soon.
I forget, did Nox told Jon of his origin? Or did Jon's instinct serves him well, here? heh.
Loving this. Thank you
Hmm... I was very much reminded of Prince of Persia, or even Disney's Aladdin, with Jasmine facsimile playing Arianne. She's quite impressive here...but Daenerys still reign supreme. Plus, Jon is unfortunately too young...for whatever she's used to playing with. True, Beauty is Power, but unfortunately for her, it's the least of the attribute she needs to play to hook Jon. The timing is just... too soon.
I forget, did Nox told Jon of his origin? Or did Jon's instinct serves him well, here? heh.
Loving this. Thank you
12/4/2020 c12 InfinityMask
I have bad feelings about Nyra. Hope Cat didn’t do something foolish in her stupid pride and denial. Sigh.
Anyway love Jon vs daemon and his fight with Gerold. I think people would feel that fight as validation enough that Jon is Ashara’s.
Nox really humiliated Gerold huh? And expose Gerold Insecurities.
Hmm the maester would probably send raven on what Jon and Nox do. I hope nothing bad would happen. Tho I wonder, would they demand to be able to see and read the book Nox found in Valyria?
I have bad feelings about Nyra. Hope Cat didn’t do something foolish in her stupid pride and denial. Sigh.
Anyway love Jon vs daemon and his fight with Gerold. I think people would feel that fight as validation enough that Jon is Ashara’s.
Nox really humiliated Gerold huh? And expose Gerold Insecurities.
Hmm the maester would probably send raven on what Jon and Nox do. I hope nothing bad would happen. Tho I wonder, would they demand to be able to see and read the book Nox found in Valyria?
12/4/2020 c12 
2miguelgiuliano.co
very good chapter without a doubt this chapter is a masterpiece.
I really liked how you are raising the growth of certain characters such as Yara and Jon. but without a doubt I was fascinated by how you have written to Arianne, I like how you are presenting her.
I hope Jon has an orgy obviously the older sand snakes Yara and Arianne would be great to see Jon somewhat disoriented the next day.
Regarding Valyrian steel weapons I suppose that some will go to some important houses for the plans of Nox and company in order to make some commercial alliances.
Another point is that I can't wait to see what will happen in Jon's future from now on.
It would be great if Obara decides to go North and maybe in a few years he decides to accompany Yara to the Iron Islands and cause some 'order' xd.
2miguelgiuliano.covery good chapter without a doubt this chapter is a masterpiece.
I really liked how you are raising the growth of certain characters such as Yara and Jon. but without a doubt I was fascinated by how you have written to Arianne, I like how you are presenting her.
I hope Jon has an orgy obviously the older sand snakes Yara and Arianne would be great to see Jon somewhat disoriented the next day.
Regarding Valyrian steel weapons I suppose that some will go to some important houses for the plans of Nox and company in order to make some commercial alliances.
Another point is that I can't wait to see what will happen in Jon's future from now on.
It would be great if Obara decides to go North and maybe in a few years he decides to accompany Yara to the Iron Islands and cause some 'order' xd.
12/4/2020 c12 1TheWateringWizard
God I hope Jon doesn’t fall for Arianne... he’s Dany’s, even if he doesn’t know it yet !
Man that chapter was awesome ! Jon was so badass at the end ! And never apologise for the lengths of the chapter, I don’t care. The more the better ! You could put out 100k words and I would sit and read it all the same. There’s not a lot of Star Wars/GoT crossovers so you can’t even imagine how much I love this one.
I can’t wait for their return and reunion north
1TheWateringWizardGod I hope Jon doesn’t fall for Arianne... he’s Dany’s, even if he doesn’t know it yet !
Man that chapter was awesome ! Jon was so badass at the end ! And never apologise for the lengths of the chapter, I don’t care. The more the better ! You could put out 100k words and I would sit and read it all the same. There’s not a lot of Star Wars/GoT crossovers so you can’t even imagine how much I love this one.
I can’t wait for their return and reunion north
12/4/2020 c12 chickenbass
That was a really cool fight! really demonstrating the gap between non force users.
That was a really cool fight! really demonstrating the gap between non force users.
12/4/2020 c12 AnimeA55Kicker
So either Nox has a kid on the way, or his lover died. My bets are on the kid.
And I’m not sure if I want Arianna to be successful in taking Jon as a consort or not. On one hand, manipulation, on the other hand, he gets a hot tan girl to fuck. Oh well, Nox won’t let anything too bad happen.
So either Nox has a kid on the way, or his lover died. My bets are on the kid.
And I’m not sure if I want Arianna to be successful in taking Jon as a consort or not. On one hand, manipulation, on the other hand, he gets a hot tan girl to fuck. Oh well, Nox won’t let anything too bad happen.
12/4/2020 c12 1thecurler66
Heyho
First i want to say that the lenght of the chapter is not bad AT ALL.
I was in a train today for a long time so it was absolutely perfect.
like the last time i want to say that i'm really curious about what the rest of the realm will say about all of this, maybe a little timeskip while the seawolf returns to white harbor?
I'm now really curious about the parings you are planning for jon, dany, arianne, rob, asha,...
I'm very eager to read of JON STARK soon.
Perhaps a little question. Do you already now if there will be another chapter before new years eve? i would like to read another one before i have my exams in january
very good story, keep going, and DONT FEEL BAD if this grow into a very long story, to be honest, i hope so.
1thecurler66Heyho
First i want to say that the lenght of the chapter is not bad AT ALL.
I was in a train today for a long time so it was absolutely perfect.
like the last time i want to say that i'm really curious about what the rest of the realm will say about all of this, maybe a little timeskip while the seawolf returns to white harbor?
I'm now really curious about the parings you are planning for jon, dany, arianne, rob, asha,...
I'm very eager to read of JON STARK soon.
Perhaps a little question. Do you already now if there will be another chapter before new years eve? i would like to read another one before i have my exams in january
very good story, keep going, and DONT FEEL BAD if this grow into a very long story, to be honest, i hope so.
12/4/2020 c12 Guest
Great chapter looking forward to more... i really hope Jon get together with either obara or arianna
Great chapter looking forward to more... i really hope Jon get together with either obara or arianna
12/4/2020 c12 darth Queidus
Very good. It's sad that later you'll have to be creative with the Night King since the show was to lazy. It is good to see the power of a dark lord of the Sith. Keep it up.
Very good. It's sad that later you'll have to be creative with the Night King since the show was to lazy. It is good to see the power of a dark lord of the Sith. Keep it up.
12/4/2020 c12 Navn Ukjent
Another fun chapter.
It will be interesting to see the reactions from all of Westeros when they hear about the sucess of the expedition and of the treasures that they bring back!
Another fun chapter.
It will be interesting to see the reactions from all of Westeros when they hear about the sucess of the expedition and of the treasures that they bring back!
12/4/2020 c12 TheSoundOfThunderingEngines
This was an amazing. Long but good. Glad to see Jon getting powerful.
This was an amazing. Long but good. Glad to see Jon getting powerful.